I'm crying so much why did you have to do this I mean I love it but it hurts so much I really can't stop crying

"You know, your mother was your age when she came into my office and demanded a job." Hotch chuckled at the memories. "
Idek why this gives me so many feels. *silently crying* you are so good at writing sad stories tho.

This is so sad it makes me want to cry :( Awh why did Emily have to go so early?! gahdhdk you know I feel like such a weirdo; sometimes I think Hotch would make the greatest dad and if I had him as a father I'd be all badass too but then again he's so damn attractive and then it gets weird in my head O.o but I'd stick to him being attractive because Hotch is beautiful :3 anyway this was so lovely and I the 'goodbye speech' was bittersweet but beautifully said! I loved this, you're awesomesauce xo

It made me cry! :'(

YAY, Florence The Machine... good start already ;)

Ah, Avery as a mama! Jack would seriously make such an awesome brother! He's so sweet, and caring.

Uh oh, just the mention of Hotch's time almost being up, and Em being gone is already making me tear up...

Aw, his 'speech' :(

Goodness, Nooshin... that was incredibly sad, but so beautiful!

Sad but beautiful!

aww so sad...now you should do when of them meeting in heaven ;)

great story

Nooshin, you KNOW I love you, but I'm REALLY hoping you'll write another multi fic soon, one that wouldn't make me cry! This was so beautiful and so heart wrenching. Aargh! *sob* loved the flower references, the kids saying goodbye, the granddaughter. You are just awesome. That is all.

Hey! :))

I must say, this is the first time i write a review to you :)

actually the first one since I've joined *_*

I LOVE your Story, I really do, although it's very sad... :(

I've cried since the first few sentences ... :D

Very well written!

Your next stories will get reviews from me :))

I promise!

regards,

PreciousAngel

BTW: Sorry for my bad english, I'm from Germany and veryy young :DD (14 years) *_*

*sniff*

why must you make me cry?

great story, but wow, so sad.

oh gosh, there are tears streaming down my face. That was so beautiful and moving. Thank you for making me cry again, haha.

I loved it! I haven't read the Fade to Black story, mainly because I wasn't sure if I could handle Emily dying, but I think I may check it out. You're a really great writer!