Reviews for Winter Wonderland
Riuko chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Touko, I think you gave N the wrong ide about being a man sweetie. Adorable story!
bulbasoars chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Awww This was so cute. I read this a long time ago, but just realized I didn't leave a review so...

I love every moment of this: just the right touch of humor and romance along with great writing. I especially love N. N is amazing xD His personality was spot-on in my opinion. He wasn't too geeky or too childish, which is something authors seem to struggle with when writing for N (including me)

Well, this was a very cute story, so thanks for the wonderful read :)
Team Death the Kid chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Gah! How does a story this good only have 1 review? Well, now it has two. Aside from one or two grammar mistakes and a few awkward sentences, it's a really good story! I was grinning like an idiot the whole time! thank you for a very cute fic, I can't wait to check out some of your other stories too!
UnknownDeletedAccount chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
""We meet again," a voice murmured from behind her. White rolled her eyes and sighed. After numerous occasions of running into N, or having him sneak up from behind her; she really wasn't surprised to hear his voice."

Its okay White, its normal to get use to your stalkers. X'D

"I fell on my ass. Thank you for failing to notice that."

WIN. Something I would probably say. X'DDDDD

""Am I supposed to?" he enquired uncertainly in a tone that made White giggle."

AHA! White's tsundere attitude has finally went to the tsun (love) part! X3 That's what I always thought of her as. Her and Silver, tsunderes, Soul, a lolita, Red, just the silent type, Leaf, quite normal, Blue, too cocky, and N, ...he just can't fit into a description X'DDD

" "Bottoms have no other function but to excrete waste. Why are you laughing?" he demanded as he realized that she was laughing. "Bottoms aren't a laughing matter!""

OMFG. DUDE. This is total WIN. It sounds like something that would happen in my biology class X'DDDDDDD

"I asked you why you were laughing," he rephrased softly, fists clenched. "And I expect an answer.""

Oohhh :3

""You're so male, but yet... not exactly male,""

Good explanation (sarcasm) X'DDDDD

" What's the occasion for those lights being up?" he pointed, looking like a wide eyed preschooler. "Is it a holiday?"

"Yeah. It's nearly Christmas," White said, regretting the loss of eye contact. "You know what Christmas is... right?" truthfully, she had no idea. There was so much that he didn't know...

"No,"

D'awwww. Something N and Silver have in common. :'D

""Christmas time is the time for giving. It's a festivity," she added as he raised an eyebrow. "The children believe that Santa Claus brings them presents. But, the main reason behind it is the birth of Mew. Son of Arceus"

SWEET JESUS. o.o

I mean SWEET MEW. X'DDD

I would never be able to describe Christmas like White just did. I would say "Ya' get presents from this old man who makes all the children forget Mew's birthday and ya' later find out doesn't exist." X'DDD

"The feel of N's warm hand in hers only offered some comfort. "

AHA! That's a common first move future couples make. "Accidently"

still holding hands. X3

"N, it's- what are you doing?" her eyes widened again as she saw N shrugging off his sweater.

"Helping," he responded, pulling it over his head and giving White a good view of his flat stomach and ribs before his white shirt slid down. "Here. My sweater is very warm. Cashmere nearly always is," he told her after a second thought, handing over the sweater with a sweet smile.

Another hint WIN. X3

""Um... are there any bushes around by chance?"

"Why? Are you in need of a toilet?" his tone revealed the almost regal disgust he had for that idea."

I SWEAR, I WOULD DIE LAUGHING IF SOMEONE SAID THAT TO ME. OMFG. X'DDDDDDDDDDDD

""Why can't you change in front of me?" she sweat dropped visibly. "Aren't you a human as well?"

"Just turn around and don't look," she requested wearily after a quick gaze of the street revealed no bushes."

Ahh. The Pervert Test. Let's see if N passes or fails.

""Hey!" a voice barked from close by. "Put some clothes on over there, you damn stripper!""

OMFG. . X'DDDDDDDDDDDDDD

N and White both jumped. N turned to ask White what a stripper was, only to have his jaw hit the floor and feel the color rush to his face.

N on his vocabulary FAIIILL.

N on the Pervert Test FAIILL.

X'DDDD

""That was... different," N admitted, clearing his throat. The brunette said nothing. "I don't quite understand why you wanted me to look away. You look nice. Different to me... and to your friends.""

Another Goku moment X'D

You're more male than I thought after all..." she said faintly, pulling her face up regardless of the blush covering her face, "to notice that..."

"All I had to do was notice your breasts?" N murmured to himself as his cheeks began to burn too. "Women..." out loud, he said, "Think nothing of it, White. It... puzzles me to get that reaction out of you, but that light in your eyes is nice." cupping her face in his hand, he stared into her blue eyes and smiled without thinking of it. White lost all train of thought as their eyes stayed connected. They may have sat there for hours without knowing it.

"You're beautiful," N whispered, stroking her cheek. "Never let anyone tell you otherwise. Especially on Christmas," he added as he pressed his lips to hers.

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I didn't like it, I LOVED IT! X33 Thank you!