I like the premise a lot. I don't mean for this to come off as mean at all, but I do have some things that I felt as a reader that made me not want to read further. First, the chapters were long and almost all introspective, which was a bit boring for me personally. Then the writing was a bit redundant (Darien explained how he transformed, what he remembered, how he felt about rini, etc to Andrew, Mina, Serena, and thought about it to himself, in great detail each time). I think you write very well though, and obviously a lot of others think so too. Good luck with future writing! :)

I really like the whole idea of this story and alternative vision of black moon arc.
The beginning was so intrigueing with Serena beeing in such state and how everyone took that situation. But more towards the end things began to become a bit boring. Some ideas like Diamonds assault on Serena, difficult relationship between Rini and everyone else, and Andrew-Itonus part were just like a breath of fresh air between often repetition of information. It was a bit unnerving to read chapters where so much text was repeated from the previous chapter, sometimes I even scrolled further to omit it (I'm writing this not to offend but just simply express the way I felt while reading some parts of the story).
But as I said I very much like idea of this fanfiction and you did a great job! Thank you for the story.

Interesting story and I like the end , hope there will be a second part
But Rini ...hope the young Serena will get twins as first child's or a boy first and sometime later Rini, so she will not be like this one , but a well mannered girl , who learns to help and be nice to others and has siblings who will teach her when she try to be bad and parents do not see it...but the queen really needs to get some more children so her Rini is no longer an only child and has responsibilities

Thanks for the great story~

That was awesome...

Oooooo here we go...

I just have to say...YOUR SAILOR MOON STORIES ARE JUST SO GOOD. I CAN'T STOP READING AND RE-READING THEM. You are such a talented writer and I just felt the need to tell you. Keep up the good work!

Loved the story!

Awwww

Loved the ending! Such an awesome way to tie it all up in a pretty bow!
I hope there is more, maybe a sequel!?

Aww, love this and hope your continue to write for this pair/universe. Read ya Later ;)

will this story have a sequel?

Nawh this was lovely I loved it, can’t wait for updates of other fics!

Totally awesome story, not many good Sailor Moon stories coming out right now, and for it to be completed? Thanks so much!

What a great way to end this story. I loved reading every second of this. XO