| Reviews for Young Justice and the Pentawizard Tournament |
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Guest chapter 7 . 7/16 Wow, this is really good! |
rejectedthorns chapter 1 . 6/15 THIS WAS SO GOOD! YOUR WRITING STYLE IS AMAZING AND THE STORY IS SO COOL! |
Guest chapter 7 . 3/28 Plot twist! Zatanna comes to watch the second task and is used as the hostage for Dick. Keep on writing! |
Anonymous chapter 7 . 3/28 I was kind of hoping Dick would ask Zatanna to the ball. This is pretty cool, I can’t wait to see what happens next. Are Dick and Harry going to be the ones in the graveyard? Robin could vanish and come back right before Harry apparates away and they both say Voldy is back. Please update soon! |
DarthVader7754 chapter 7 . 3/19 Oh, I know it’s been so long, but if you see this please update. Or at least update us on if the story is over or not. This is so good and interesting! I would love to see it continued but I also completely understand if you lost inspiration |
inuyasha16451 chapter 7 . 12/8/2019 OMG. Please please come back and update this awesome story soon |
TingTing chapter 1 . 6/24/2018 Man I haven’t read this fic since I was like 16? Maybe younger? I’m 22 now and it’s so nice get back into it again, it’s such a well done crossover! One someone might think won’t work but it TOTALLY works! I’m not really sure how to “review” fan fiction, in terms of what works, what doesn’t, all I know is how a piece makes me feel! And this one makes me feel great! |
samantha.rea.12 chapter 7 . 12/3/2017 I really hope you haven’t abandoned this! It’s wonderful and I hope see more! Also I love the hint to Wally/Dick and hope that’ll be an actual pair here! |
Guest chapter 7 . 10/8/2017 Please continue this story! It's really good |
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 7 . 3/16/2017 Nice with Conner caring for Hagrid, and LOL yeah sorry boys, but given who M'gann has regularly associated with since joining the Team, and how she deals with Wolf as a pet, Skrewts are sadly not too unusual for her Yep, Conner certainly has possessive issue, albeit understandably While still unclear what had first tipped them off about 'Moody,' I do like how you go about investigating him in a careful and logical process. Rita was also a good way to make it more difficulty by putting him on guard Really hoping you get back to this story. What I particularly like is that you do not have the YJ cast dominating the story, but instead bring in useful and new stuff from the HP cast as well with them not being pushed to the side. Also that the whole Team has bits of the story involving them as opposed to just focusing on one or two heroes |
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 6 . 3/15/2017 :-D for Conner shirtless scene! Interesting point that Snape would be more forthcoming with students who showed a genuine enthusiasm and brilliance for Potions, something I have not seen before. That he still gives biting comments keeps it character even if he is more accepting of the duo. Nice work! LOL for Wally giving books a point against him in Ron's book Bagman tends to be readily overlooked, but very good point that his debts would make him a significant suspect, especially since like 'Moody' he wants Harry to reach the Cup first. Still no sign of why they are suspicious of 'Moody' outside of an apparent bad feeling. ...Until the butterbeer incident. Smooth catch, first time I have ever seen someone bring that up! ...It is hard to say whether or not the constantly changing passwords ARE careful security (not paranoid, are people out to get them) and that Wally is just saying that to dampen suspicions, or if they really are that bored. Probably a mixture of both You know, I really appreciate Wally being Robin's date. Not only throwing in the face of Wizard prejudices, but amusing and in character even if you do not ship the pair (although I WAS expecting Zatana) Good touch that the Mind Link is unavailable, evening the playing field |
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 5 . 3/14/2017 Like the scene with Conner and Skeeter, and wish we could have seen the original chasing her off from Robin! LOL for Ron's suspicions being so close, particularly the glare part Curious on what tipped them off to 'Moody' |
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 4 . 3/14/2017 Nice and amusing touch that Wally is still in magical denial Good finale for Dick, with a final touch with the judges |
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 3 . 3/14/2017 LOL for what Robin does with the photo, especially how the wizards briefly think the short guy is literally part troll :-D Nice touch on how well Artemis fares against Malfoy and totally in character for her to give Hermione that advice Loving how the Hogwarts students have no idea they are dealing with child soldiers here |
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 2 . 3/13/2017 First time I have seen Ron's POV for when he is being a jerk to Harry, good touch, especially on the guilt and pointing out that even Ron's own family seems to like Harry better LOVE that scene where Conner tames Crab and subsequent stuff! Was so hoping for something like that! |