A damn good representation of what a Big Sister might think. I mean, what Little Sisters might think can be a troublesome task by itself, but representing a Big Sisters POV, well, i applaud you good sir. For you seem to have got it right. When i say this, i mean from reading all three of your chapters i mean.

I must say this is quite refreshing from all the other stories I have read.

The way you cause the Big Sister to go back and forth really brings you into her head with huge "WTF was that?" moments.

I agree with the previous reviewer (can't remember the name, sorry), that even though this seems like a good place to stop, I want more!

This was really unique, a joy to read! I agree, too often the big sisters are sueish and boring but it was nice to get inside one of their heads, seems Rapture drives everyone insane.

Does the story end here? It seems like a natural end - I mean, they're all dead, right? (Which is fine) But you haven't marked it complete and now I'm curious...