Sorry princess, didn't really do anything much, especially compared to similar stories you've told. Why? Character. Simple as that. All four protagonists were a little predictable and flat.
It was ok but lacked your usual flair.

Love it really good wish there was more.

Awesome.

This was awesome, u grasped riddler very well.( especially for someone whom prefers Joker, but I can't blame u I do too.)
I enjoyed the love interest, I only wish that u had devolved Lauren more. Like how/ why she was in the asylum.

Oh my god, I don't ever review stories that i have read. This... This is just amazing, you should really have written this as a whole story. I really enjoyed this!

heyy this was really good :)! i wish it was longer! lol

its cute 3

though I dont understand why you put the story under the category "Joker" ,when it is all about riddler/oc ...

This is really good! But you could have made this a whole story! not just one chapter. You could have explained how she got into Arkham, her time before meeting luna. Prehaps make Luna a tad unhinged? but people tell me my stories go on and on and on ;3 anywhale, its good, looking forward to see where you're going with this :)

My story will be uploaded soon, hope you check it out :)

I like your story! I love the Riddler and Joker and I like how they both are included. There needs to be more Riddler stories! (even if he wasn't in the two movies) I can't wait for more! :D

i thought your story was pretty darn cool. and i hope you write more.