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Oh love it! I would love a second chapter!

brilliant, believable, and very sweet. I liked it very much. Thank you.

I wish that there was more to this, but I still love it!

Pretty sure I read this every Christmas lol. Even though the show has been on four season and things have changed you have Reese and Finch's personalities down. This could pretty much take place anytime during the show. Wonderful work!

Oh wow, this is seriously amazing! My favorite scene, or at least one of my dozen favorite scenes in this wonderful story, is when John asks Harold to cuddle. I couldn't stop laughing right along with

that cute and hot

Amazing. Simply amazing. I loved it. Thank you for writing it.

So endearing. Loved it

This is beautiful! Smut and character development and interaction in a one shot. Also, I really liked how their first time is real, in other words, a bit confuse and embarrassing.

Lovely! Thanks for sharing it D

Your phrasing, word choice and characters hesitation are spot on. I wasn't reading - I was listening to a full-on theater in my head. Yours is the first fan fic I've read in about seven years and I'm so appreciative of your quality and attention to detail.

This was wonderfully tender and angsty. If they ever got together, it would be like this. I loved it.

They were so IC that for a second I thought that this was written by J.J Abrams's men.

At the beginning, their situation was so awkward that it was making me feel awkward. And then, words keep coming and making them get closer, vulnerable, and it was just perfect.

Great one-shot!

There is just something amazing and thrilling about John being the inexperienced one. I so love it.

Sweet Finch ! I like that kind of Christmas *w*