Great story!

What a great job you did with this gig...the two ghosts where a nice suprise and the hurt Dean was just icing on the cake! I like the idea that Vic is their backup, backup. (so to speak, lol)

Thanks for the hunt with Dean and Sam, taking along Victor.

Liked the fact Sam made up Karen for Victor to marry. :D Also laughed at the idea of Dean making them a gay couple, if he had to come up with the lie.

Great idea, the detailed lie of the southwest corner wall falling in at the Aunt Betty's. Excellent forethought!

wonderful goodbye to the good ghost. Poor girl.

And everyone ended up sore or hurt somehow - even Dean in the hospital. Great story!

I'm really liking this AU. A lot of the time in Supernatural I found myself wondering why they never decided to partner up with any of the many people they worked with on a more permanent basis. I know it would interfere with the whole "true brothers" narrative, but it frustrated me and in terms of the AU I hope Vic sticks around.

Man, this just keeps getting better and better! I love it! Can't wait to see what happens next! ;) Oh, happy easter by the way!

A ghost called Scully... gotta love that ;)

Sounds like Dean.

Why would Victor use the word "shit" and degrade his use of language, intelligence, and ability to think above then vulgar?

Would an educated, sophisticated man like Victor use the word "shit" as though he could not better express himself?

Oh awesome. I'm glad that this whole adventure could have a happy ending for someone. :)

Nice description of the recovery time. But sheesh, they couldn't get off with an easy hunt this time, could they? No, there has to be more!

Ha, this is great. Even though this is really serious, I was definitely laughing at all of their cover stories. Great stuff there. Good thinking on their feet.

"Oh god. Karen." pffffft.

Whoa. That was a great way to resolve the thing with the ghosts. Definitely squirmed when Henricksen stepped on the eyes. But yeah, now they have to make sure Dean's okay. He should have been looked at a lot sooner and none of them are at their best right now.

You had a lot of great action and lines in this one!

Some of my faves:

"I'm not here to just stand around and look pretty." Victor tried to sound confident. It didn't help that he had no idea what the brothers where up to. / "That's Dean's part."

Persuade a ghost to do something for you while you were getting strangled by said ghost didn't even work out in theory. They should have noticed that. Damn.

He tried to reload his gun without actually looking at it – damn, how did the Winchesters do that? – while he repeated the mantra of "open the door, open the door ..."

Oh I think this is your best chapter yet. It's so intense! I absolutely LOVED the banter about the amber room and the et tu, brute and Henricksen's tv watching habits. But now Dean's injured and they're on lock down. Whoa.