| Reviews for Two Heart's New, Lost Love |
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Guest chapter 17 . 6/8/2017 Please get rid of inuyasha |
Lunaerfaerie2010 chapter 16 . 5/11/2017 Please update again as soon as you can. Understandable if you can't. This sorry is amazing and I can't wait to read more. |
Illeria demon goddess chapter 15 . 5/1/2017 I love the story so far! Please keep writing more. Can't wait for the battle scene and the after part. |
lilith.firestorm chapter 4 . 4/21/2017 Very well written |
N1K1TA007 chapter 15 . 4/16/2017 Great story. Can't wait to read some more. |
lara5170 chapter 9 . 4/13/2017 So if Kagome went home in this chapter what did her family say about her change? |
Ashatan87 chapter 14 . 4/9/2017 Thasks for the lemon! The nerve of Inuyasha getting mad at Kagome for choosing Seshoumaru! And for him to tell Seshoumaru to stay away again and the she is his! I can't wait to see what happens next between Seshy and Kags and Yasha! |
lara5170 chapter 13 . 4/4/2017 Where are Shippo and Rin? |
lara5170 chapter 7 . 4/4/2017 Why would they leave Naraku alive to come back again and why would they not attempt to try to get rid of the jewel? Why did Kagome ride on Inuyasha's back after he hurt her without care and she became more powerful than him? |
write more soon chapter 14 . 4/2/2017 write more soon |
bella cullen the original chapter 14 . 4/4/2017 huh? where's the update... there's no new chapter... But anyway thank you for writing this story... It's quite good :D |
rinmagic2 chapter 14 . 4/3/2017 The link does not work for lemon. |
Tickling Tears chapter 12 . 12/8/2015 The story is pretty good, but the plot line needs a little work. One thing that caught my attention is the excessive number of baths. Not only does it not fit the time period, but it also distracts from moving the plot forward. The first was before bed, which makes sense. But then there's another one the next morning. This one can also be explained if she is really into hygiene, but it still seems excessive. Then, the same day, she bathes again after training (expected) and AGAIN after dinner (why?). In your shoes, I would limit this to two baths (morning/evening and after training) and maybe three if you're really determined. But I cannot justify 4 baths in 24 hours during a time when baths were a luxury, even in a palace. And while this may seem like nitpicking, I found it distracting to the plot. I hope this was helpful. |
kissrose36 chapter 12 . 12/2/2015 next chapter please |
slvrphoenx chapter 12 . 11/16/2015 Loved how caring Sesshomaru was towards Kagome. I always like when Sesshomaru expresses his feelings because it is so different from how he normally acts. I also enjoyed how Sango reacted to Kagome's news. Looking forward to the next update. |