Great story! Loved it!

Because if her age? Is she really that old? Wich season is this set in? Always thought of Emily as quite young..

The story was good then the last chapter had bad grammar and shit dialogue come on don't get sloppy

I know this is fanfiction so it shouldn't be a big deal, but the ooc-ness in this is making me cringe. I feel like Emily is written as weak & so reliant on Hotch. I also feel like Hotch is really neglecting Jack, something that I don't think real-Hotch would consciously do. Jack is supposed to be the most important thing for him yet he is second when it comes to the baby. I guess you are writing them as you see them so I can't begrudge you for that. It is an enjoyable read but I feel like the characters are not done justice at all.

Stumbled on your story today and couldn't stop reading it! Loved the whole thing! Has the sequel been written yet?

Sequel

:-D

Love the jealousy. Oh boy. Great cliffhanger.

Oh no. Poor hotch is going to think Rossi n Emily are together.

I loved this story! If you can't tell I'm reading all of your stuff. You are such a talented writer.

I LOVED this chapter and I was so happy when you put that song in. I LOVE that movie (Julie Andrews is AMAZING!) and I LOVED that song!

GOD YOU GAVE ME A HEART ATTACK! But I loved it! I'm just glad that everything's okay!

YAY! I mean I hate Strauss, but I'm glad she was okay with everything

LOVED it! I had a feeling he would walk in, and it was perfect!

Ok, I know you wrote this a while ago, but I am just dying of laughter reading this chapter. You have a great sense of humor!