Great story

Guest below me is an idiot

What a horrible match just horrible

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It wasn't the ending I was expecting, but honestly I don't know what I was expecting. It would have been funny, however, if Trunks had ended up bonding with Pan as well.

Bonjour,
J'aime beaucoup cette histoire. Pourrais tu faire la version trunks et pan pour la suite?
Merci de l'avoir terminé.

congrats on finishing this story! I cannt believe this has been going for five years. Well done!

Hmm, interesting. She still doesn't seem happy because her emotions have been played with for so long. I get that.

Yup Goten, you are the problem here. Wake up!
And Bulma, don't go meddling in Saiyan business.

Ahh it's over, great story.

Even though I knew the end was near, this is still such a bittersweet moment for me. First I'd like to thank you Maddie for all the work you put into this. Thank you so much for writing this story until the end, and specially, thank you for sharing your work with us. You are truly talented. This story is and probably will remain my favorite fanfiction work and you my favorite author.

I'm not going to lie, I wanted to see more on the last chapter, I specially wanted to see a love scene between Goten and Bura since every time they got together in the story was always in a very animalistic kind of way. I don't think Goten ever told Bura he loved her. Lol. It's ok though, I take what I can get and knowing the story gets an end is already amazing. I now need to find what to do with myself. Haha. I looked forward to your updates all the time. Maybe you'll decide to write something about these two again in the future when life isn't so overwhelming :)

Once again, thank you for the wonderful journey Maddie. Best of luck.

Luf

Awesome dude,,, just incredible

I can believe, voy a extrañar esta historia, me gustaba mucho.

Woooo, great story girl! I never thought I could ever enjoy a Goten x Bra story but you totally got me hooked and it was a great ride. Looking forward to your next updates!

Overall, loved the story but the ending felt rushed. I really wished there was more closure with Gohan, Chi Chi and Trunks but you finished it! Congrats and thanks for the one of the best Goten and Bran stories!