Reviews for Harry of the Viridian Forest |
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MoonlightMiracle.SakurianaHime chapter 6 . 2/2 Please continue this story and update soon! |
Guest chapter 6 . 11/3/2019 Ash is just a inch shorter then me! Also good job on this chapter! |
Vhully chapter 6 . 1/5/2017 RIP, I'm assuming. This story was well written too. |
shedges19 chapter 1 . 9/17/2016 are you going to write more? |
KyoudaiDoushi chapter 5 . 4/5/2015 Butterfree and Pidgeotto? I vaguely recall Ash catching a Caterpie and Pidgey in Viridian Forest, but did it really evolve that fast in canon? Unless I counted wrong isn't only been a few days, a week at most. Then again, we never did see Ash actually TRAINING any of his Pokémon other than that one episode early in the first season with the green haired gym leader... and even in that one he was more ARGUING with the guy over his training methods than actually doing any training himself. They all seemed to just get stronger and evolve on their own. It's no wonder his Charmander had less and less respect for him the further up it evolved. He didn't actually DO anything to help it get there. |
KyoudaiDoushi chapter 4 . 4/4/2015 Really? If I'm understanding what this "experiment" was... you made Leaf's Dad a Rocket scientist? |
KyoudaiDoushi chapter 3 . 4/4/2015 Minor mistake: In Harry's battle with Gary you said that "Zeru" put "Gastly" to sleep. |
KyoudaiDoushi chapter 2 . 4/4/2015 You know, that's one thing I've never really understood. Yeah, I know it's suppose to be a kid's manga/anime and everything and yeah, I know most if not all Rocket teams are idiots in general, but WHY in the world would they attack a HOSPITAL on a Route that might as well be labeled as the "Pokémon So Easy To Catch If You Screw Up Here You Might As Well Quit And Go Home Now" Route looking for RARE Pokémon? I do like how you've ranked the reality meter up a bit from the canon though. Idiots or not, Team Rocket are terrorists; of course they don't care about hurting / potentially killing kids and bedridden Nurses. |
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 6 . 9/24/2014 great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting. Harry's Charmeleon should teach Ash's Pikachu Iron Tail. |
guhgiog08e9rhiogoiheg98whgiogo chapter 6 . 3/9/2014 Great tory, hope you decide to continue! |
Gaben chapter 5 . 3/4/2014 Oh, so you're making Harry into a bully now. |
jeanette9a chapter 6 . 10/7/2013 don't worry i'm not picky at that. ;3 |
ReadAlert chapter 6 . 4/2/2013 Will it be bashing on Dumbledore and Weasley who will try to kidnap Harry back under thier control? |
Potterformers chapter 3 . 4/1/2013 You ensure to get Pokemon for all regions. then after that make a new region up and new Pokemon. |
Potterformers chapter 1 . 4/1/2013 I get it 'Incendio,' |