JenniferxAndy OTP-ness.
I have to say, since I love this pairing and series, I automatically clicked on this. But, and no offense to you, I found the writing very...uninteresting. You write as if giving a recap of events instead of telling an actual story, and it felt as if I was reading a script or book report rather than a fic. My advice would be to not rush by so quickly-use sensory detail, vary your sentence length and structure, etc.
Two more things: I think the "sweatdrop" part and the "I love you, you love me..." part really didn't fit and just made the story feel a bit awkward. Yes, these things may work in manga, but remember: writing for manga and writing for stories are two different things, and sometimes crossing over the styles can mess up an otherwise good piece.
Anyway, on to the positive! I really like the idea, I just think it could be written differently. Hurry up and update. u
-Mag

Make more chapters! I can't wait! You left of at a cliff hanger, so tempting... I love the fan fiction a lot! People need to make more with Dr. Andy and Jennifer k. :3

I loved this! I can't believe there aren't many Amazing Agent Luna fanfics...anyway, I ship this pairing SO hard! PLEEEEEASE countinue!

Please continue there aren't many FICA for this story

Hahaha, this was great! Very, funny, and the writing was excellent :) I really hope you update soon, because I really wanna know what happens next!

Reviews are like porn, lol. Great story. I feel like your description is a little flat though, and your sentence structure is a little repetitive.

Oh wow this was really good i hope you continue i wanna see how this ends.

Oooh! Creepy random ninja time! Controls isn't very good when it comes to normal, everyday conversations, is she? .'

That was AWESOME! Keep up the good work!

I feel very weird reviewing ur story after what you said... but I recently became a fan to :)and i was like wow just two but.. anyways I think mabey i would write about to but... naw.

anywayssssss PLZ UPDATE!3