Sense and good humour wins the day. It's amazing how fast stuff gets solved in this and still works. (though I admit the tempestuousness of both Darcy and Elisabeth was excellent in the novel in this scene, and brought perfectly in spirit in the movie)

very cute!

uuh, this is interesting! I think I like this version better than the canon xD

Nicely done. Perhaps have Lizzie smile less in the beginning, and slowly start later on. That's about my only criticism. Or perhaps add some hesitation on Darcy's part towards devulging the story ending with his sister's averted fate, that is somewhat shameful/embarrassing after all.

Thanks for a lovely little alternative possibility!

Interesting scene.

I'm in love with this one!

Intriguing twist!

amazing what a single frank conversation can achieve.

This Elizabeth has been training to be an agent of the CIA, FBI, KGB, agent of shield, the next 007 and a transformer. That's is why she stayed so calm and compose jiji. Nevertheless good to read thanks for writing

Nice! Well done! An excellent alternative.

That was fun. It would have been an interesting way to develop things, cutting out the necessity of the letters.

Nicely done.

Sincerely,
Miriam

While I greatly enjoyed this story, I feel that it should not be categorized under "books" seeing as this is taken from the Kiera Knightley movie version of the story, not Jane Austen's original work. Aside from that detail, I thought that this was incredibly well done!

(Said in a British accent) I quite enjoyed this. It was absolutely lovely. I do quite enjoy Pride and Prejudice, and found this take of his proposal to be quite refreshing.
Well that was my weekly attempt at a British accent. Thank you for the oppurtunity to allow mme to use it. Lol.

thank god yu dont write P&P yu sucks!

Far more believable than him proposing so poorly and her saying yes, kinder and more hopeful than what happened in canon.