That Shinzaemon is almost like Neji... Anyway, I'm thinking right now if you would throw Sakura and Shinzaemon in a love square with the main characters of this story...

I like stories like this with also the Hurt/Comfort genre... Well, in my opinion since only two genres can be chosen for a story...

Aww that's like a star wars ref right there haha, "Tenten, I am your father."

I want sequel for this story... Please...!

Now, this is how I wished the Hunger Games ended! Lol if you know what I mean. I thoroughly enjoyed this fic from day one of reading I think you might have only been a few chapters in and here it is now complete and a fitting almost bittersweet ending. I hope to read more like this from you. :)

NOOOOOOOOOOOO! TOO SADDDD CANT BEARRRRR T_T

Sopas back just 2 days only please sign spread word and while at it call the represetive link .gov

I loved it! So happy that you updated (tears of joy!)

wow it's an amazing story. can't wait till the next chapter

Wow! I kind of saw the father bit coming but not Neji killing him so fast. There are so many unanswered questions! How will Tenten react? How will Neji react? Please update soon!

It doesn't really answer any questions but I think that's natural. Questions never get answered right away in Naruto so I think it would have been crappy if you had explained everything right away. It seems like an interesting story so far. I obviously have a lot to catch up on, but I'm looking forward to it :)

damn! what a cliffhanger! i didn't see kiridashi being Tenten's father even though i probably should have lol it makes so much more sense now plz continue!

Ah, the plot twists.. great work on this and I can't wait to see what you have planned next!

Good chapter!

Nice job on this