Rouge beta:

Noone will keep it... No one

I don't know if I like the last sentence. His fate is being mourned... and still he is allowed back home?

This is definitely a very strong piece of work. Be proud. I loved the ebb and flow of it, especially the water theme. There are a lot of beautiful sentences in here. Especially the one about his fate being mourned, that just hits me.

(bonus points for an accurate summary ;) )

write on! ~tribble

simply put:

Awesome!

Great detail and imagery!

This is a very excellent read! I loved what the story is about. What I got from it was second chances and you should take them when they are given. You did a good job. I hope you will continue with the story line with Castiel's return to Dean.

Beautiful- the imagery was amazing. This would be the way I want Cas to return.