pls continue this story, your concept is very interesting!

I like the fact that you clarified the two different spellings for Blond/Blonde even though it was a likely unnoticeable detail (I honestly never knew that it was spelt differently!). I feel slightly more educated now and this story is starting to get interesting.

Just a little tidbit about characters being OOC, you have written Ed and Al a bit OOC but I think you've done it in a way where you've still mostly captured their cannon personalities as far as I can tell, but this is only the second chapter so I can't really say too much on the matter yet.

Something that did bother me though is that it almost seems like you've left out the fact that (at least in the first anime) they both knew alchemy at a very young age (they were at least around five I think). Though I can understand it if you left that detail out because it effects the way you want the plot to go.

This is so sweet, I wish there was more because I am incredibly curious about the mystery of how they ended up that way. This story just gives me fuzzy feelings honestly

Hello, sorry for any mistake English is not my original language. I know, it's been a while since you update the last chapter, but this history is really great, the attitude of the characters is well represented and the past of the elric brothers is really interesting. So, are you going to continue with this fanfic?

This is such a great story! I’m so excited to finish it. It’s so well written

I did it. I made it to the Grover, the monster at the end of this book,

A nice weekend with Mustang for sure. I'm so glad... They started to settle in...

Gee Ed, how come your dad lets you wear TWO pairs of boxers?

Ed... What could possibly be wrong? Buddy?

Pfffhahahah, ohhh that bonus scene. Very good! Hughes! VERY GOOD!

... Oh jeez I think I know exactly what medicine that is and would like to offer my condolences several years later for that special kind of stimulant hell. I hope you never learned the lesson about having alcohol on it the hard way like I did.

I was so ready to read the next chapter I navigated away before leaving a review,

And I think that's a compliment?

"Genetics", I'm HOWLING

I'm crying about siblings right now

Ed noooo...

Oh no, not me, not I. Side characters aren't usually Mary Sues, even considering how archaic the idea of a Mary Sue is...

Do Al and Ed look younger than they actually are though? I'm having a harder time believing anyone would call a fourteen year old adorable like they just walked in on a toddler wearing mom's heels.

Oh right you can't reply cause I'm anon- DONT WORRY ABOUT IT I'LL FIGURE IT OUT

The socks lie on the kitchen floor... Giving a thumbs up...