Shark didn't know when he had bent down, but that didn't matter, all that mattered was this child. This victim of war. Now as an SAS soldier, they were told that sacrifices had to be made, and you could not save everyone, that the mission was more important. And Shark knew that, however it felt like he had failed. If he had hurried, maybe he could have saved this kid. But it was too late to change the past now. Shark stared at the body in front of him and sighed.

He dreaded having to speak to the parents.

This made me tear up! *Sniff*

None. Absolutely no movement at all came from the boy, his eyelids didn't flutter, signaling that he was having a dream, nor the steady rise and fall of his chest, notification that he was breathing. Nothing at all happened from the dead boy at Sharks knees.

Shark didn't know when he had bent down, but that didn't matter, all that mattered was this child. This victim of war. Now as an SAS soldier, they were told that sacrifices had to be made, and you could not save everyone, that the mission was more important. And Shark knew that, however it felt like he had failed. If he had hurried, maybe he could have saved this kid. But it was too late to change the past now. Shark stared at the body in front of him and sighed.

He dreaded having to speak to the parents.

This is so not good good good but it's soo well written and yes you shuold conitnue ut

so sad

I say you should continue- I'm curious as to what wil happen next!

I like it and I hope you continue it.

I don't think you need to continue it, it's really good as it is. However if you were to continue it it would probably be Shark trying to find the kid's parents :)

Very good fic :)

Continue!

Oh wow, I loved this! Your writing is beautiful, and I just have to know what happens next! Please continue!