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Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2014 Aw :) This was really great. Wonderful job |
himurakenshinfan19 chapter 1 . 8/22/2012 You are a very talented writer, I really enjoyed this :) |
fuzzybluelogic chapter 1 . 6/21/2012 That was an enchanting read. Thank you. |
streakninja chapter 1 . 2/28/2012 please make a sequel |
Vanessa Masters chapter 1 . 1/28/2012 Awesome. Funny, hot, dramatic, sweet. I like it. Hopefully there's more coming soon. |
pixienerd chapter 1 . 1/26/2012 "Incredible" doesn't even begin to describe this story. Everything about it - from the flawless characterization to the detailed descriptions - was a joy to read. Definitely one of the best comic!Kurtty fics I've read to date, and quite possibly one of my favorite fanfiction stories, period. - Please, *please* write a sequel, or even just an epilogue of some sort as another reviewer suggested. At the risk of sounding melodramatic, it would make my life. P |
thrownhammer chapter 1 . 1/24/2012 Man, you nailed them both. I have always loved these two, by far the most dynamic x-people. I really felt like the dialogue was spot on for both of them. Thanks for sharing! |
WaffleNinja chapter 1 . 1/7/2012 Dear. Lord. WWHYYYYY does this story have only 1 review? That's INSANE. It's positively CRIMINAL! This story should have 1,000 reviews, all singing your praises. I guess I'll try to pick up the slack. This story is... beyond outstanding. The characterizations, the deep introspection, and a tasteful, light smattering of adult material. Kurt is my #1 favorite X-man, and I think you wrote his character very accurately. However, I loved observing him from Kitty's POV, and her consequent revelatory moments (due to her interactions with Kurt) were well thought-out, dramatic, and satisfying. There was also a great flow and balance throughout as the story switched from the past to the present. Wolverine's little cameo at the end made me smile, too. Basically, all I can say is that I had barely gotten halfway through reading your story before I favorited it. I can tell it is going to be a story that I keep revisiting every so often, and that is super exciting. Now I'm off to read your only other story, and if it is anything like this one, you will be getting another glowing review. Please write more! Sincerely, Your Newest Fan |
kgirl50 chapter 1 . 1/1/2012 What a beautiful story! im not one for horrible endings( by horible i mean they dont have sex and live happily ever after) but this was a very decent story i understoond and could follow through rather smoothly. it was nice and i enjoyed reading it great detail btw :D. i have a sudgestion though... for your fan me that is could you make an epilouge PLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE! Just a short one and make them have sex and let them fall in love and save the day or so,ething just an epilouge i feel like i was left hagning i want them to be together...SORRY! im a sap lol but again BEAUTIUFL STORY GREAT JOB!LOVE THE DETAIL! 3 |