what an awesome prologue

I really really like the concept of this story! Sad to see it hasn't been updated in a while but I hope you're still working on it! Your characterisation is spot on thus far; I especially enjoy how you wrote Ruby in that conversation with Emma there. Utterly perfect. And Graham is also very Graham; helping those who needs his help.

I need more and more Gremma/Graham because this ship sank far too soon and his character was killed off far too early for my liking and we're going to get no mention in S2, I suspect, so I'm grappling for anything that means he's alive, albeit in the FTW.

Please update, if you're still working on the story! :D

like it so far. please continue it, and please update soon! xoxo

I notice that you haven't updated this fic since January. I understand if you're busy or have other commitments, etc., but I'd like to provide some encouragement for you to continue this. You've come up with an intriguing idea to allow for Graham's continued existence in the story, as well as two interesting original characters: Philip and Goldie. (And kudos for coming up with an appropriate Storybrooke name for Goldie. ;)

Your story is also quite well-written; I'd really like to see more of this story and I'm curious to see where you end up taking it.

This is awesome. Are you planning to continue it?

XD love the whole story so far but espically Ruby/Emma reaction-scence here. ahahaha just great. and I love Graham with Goldie and Prince Phillip just is great.

Really great. I like the way you have the characters interact. It all goes so well. I can't wait to keep reading.

Awwwww...I adore the personality you gave Ruby! It's just great! Sadly we haven't seen a whole lot of her in the show so it's hard to judge how she actually acts! :D I really hope you include the scene of the girls night out...that would be fun!

And the part with Graham is most interesting...it seems he's not the first person to die in Storybrooke and that he's not the first one to land back here! Can't wait to see who else he runs into once the girl takes him back to her friends! It also completely explains why she trusts him so fast I'm starting to like the gentle, almost fatherly relationship you're building between them!

I can't wait for the next installments...this story is so much fun! In a dramatic, intriguing, amazing way!

Well, first off, I feel very fail because I didn't get the 'Sleeping Beauty' reference even though I was SURE it was something obvious. I did notice the 'The Princess and the Goblin' reference (but don't goblins have soft feet...?), however. I'm looking foreword to the girls night out though.

great chapter. I'm happy to know who the little girl & Philip are :-) I'm happy that Emma is making friends. She deserves it.

This is an excellently written story. You do such a good job with creating vivid details and distinct character voices. I desperately wanted Graham to wake up back in Fairytale world so I'm glad you're writing this.

I like the inclusion of other characters. Nice touch with the Princess & the Goblins mention. I am very interested to see what happened to Philip. And to meet the others who returned. I love the idea that the evil queen doesn't have final say over the fate of all the characters. I think they couldn't reveal this in the show without it getting really dark- why wouldn't

people kill themselves and break the curse? But I think I'm going to believe it's true for my own canon :)

One thing I'm curious about is that supposedly all characters from fairytale world are in storybrooke. I like that you have a few left behind. What I want to know is what happened to the other witches? Are they excluded in fairytale world or are they in storybooke and short on memory? I like to imagine maleficent works the counter at the DMV :)

Anyway great job- excellent writing. Please finish this story out. I am looking forward to see where you take us :)

I will be reading this properly tomorrow (after watching tonight's episode ;) ) and shall review properly. But for now *ponders*

*thwap* that's for not telling us sooner *grin*

Love you! Love it so far!

LOL I love Ruby! Her reaction is priceless!

Girl's night out, huh? this should be fun and I think Emma really needs a way to get her mind off everything that's happened to her recently. (

Yay! I guessed who the Woodcutter was!

A very good chapter and I love how you continue to shift back and forth-it makes it feel so much like the actual show!

Can't wait for the next part to come!

My, I can't wait for the restaurant scene! We have Snow White, Cinderella, Red Riding Hood, and the savior of Storybrooke at all one table in Prince Phillip's restaurant. Maybe it'll spark some memories. I'm glad I'm going to find out about Aurora and what happened to her. I'm worried she's in a coma somewhere "sleeping" as if she is, she and Philip can't have their happy ending.

LOL, Ruby likes True Blood. And Dr Whale is just as disgusting as ever. I really can't stand him. I'm sure he was somebody or something particularly nasty in FTL.

I look forward to the next chapter, and thanks for the shout-out in your AN. Like I always say, a good story like yours makes reviewing easy.

A-ha! I had a feeling that was Goldilocks! Aww, poor Goldie, getting hit by a car! )

So death brings them back to the Enchanted Forest...insteresting. I probably wouldn't advise all the fairy tale characters to kill themselves, though. Or maybe it's under certain circumstances?

Would the Woodcutter be...the Woodcutter from Red Riding Hood? I know in some versions it's a woodcutter and some it's just a huntsman like Graham.

Take your time in updating (but not too much!). I know how life can get in the way sometimes. (

-Ravenclaw