This is a very interesting take on who Maka is, and, besides the bar scene, is in the realm of possibility. At least in terms with the anime. I love how you went with it and its something that a lot of people can relate to. Excellent work.

Awww! I've read a countless number of stories about Maka with insecurities and whatnot, but this by far is one of the better ones...

Good job, I really loved and enjoyed this!

this one-shot totally suited maka, great job on it

Aww! This was too cute! I love the way Soul comforted Maka. Those two are meant for each other. :D

Rachel! WTF! This is gold! You gotta write at least another chapter!

Aww! This story is so cute! Well done again!