Story is good but the mc is just too much of a pussy for my taste if he had at least some sort of skill to level the field it would be much better imo but this story is dead and old so meh

Uhm isn't the gun overheating the only reason the guns in the game stop firing? Because I'm pretty sure that the ammunition is little specks of iron that's chipped of off a block

Or is it?

Its been almost 6 years. I guess this story is deas

It's been 5 years now and no update, is the story on hiatus or is it dead?

I'm just glad that finally, someone had the creativity to make a self-insert that relies on brains to solve problems and not hormones.

I've always been partial to stories where Aria is fleshed out and is a good character.

Is this permanently discontinued? I hope not! I'll be bookmarking this one in case it isn't. The whole fic and extra omakes were an absolute blast to read, by the way. :)

Cheers!

Why all the good stories either too short or dead. Or both

This is an interesting take on the self-insert idea with quality writing. While( thankfully) there is no Gary Stew, the main character is a bit of a pussy most of the time.

I don't often do this but even knowing that the last update for this was 4 years ago I still beg you to try a continue this. I obviously knew that it wasn't complete when I started reading but I was bored and decided to go for it anyway. I know that it's hard to depart from canon like you wrote in one of your ANs but I think you've done an admirable job of it. Fics with Aria featured so prominently are very rare and the type of SI is really very inspired. I know my interest in ME was reinvigorated with Andromeda coming out soon so I hope the same happens to you :) and if not, then that's okay too. It was a pleasure to read.

This was a good story. Shame you stopped, well I'm sure you have your reasons. Have a good day.

It was barely readable from the start and reverts to unreadable farce later with all the sinns of SI like self-indulgence in fake phsycology and idiotic moods abundant.

Highly entertaining story, and it's still ages from the parts I expected to be funny. What a pity that it seems to be abandoned, despite the stigma against SI's it deserves to be finished.

Shame, hope you update this soon.