Reviews for The Pen
Krystalized C chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
So hilarious! love it!
InoueR0xO chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Sweet I love Ichigo as well, though not the strawberry XD
foxfang27 chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
Ooo! Now I no what it is! I love it! Continue!
Devon the Shipper chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
It's a good oneshot but I have one nitpicky Japanese thing: You have Ichigo wondering whether what Orihime wrote was his name or the Japanese word for strawberries when he should be able to tell right off the bat since the Kanji in Ichigo's name and the Kanji in the Japanese word for “strawberry” are not only different, but Ichigo's name has two characters while the Japanese word for “strawberry” only has one.

I won't hold this against you though because you obviously didn't think about that. Spelling and grammar of actual Japanese Kanji isn't something a normal fanfiction author tends to think about, after all. For all I know you probably thought the two meanings were interchangeable in writing because they were pronounced the same way.
silverpendant chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Lol I liked the "red bean paste man" thing! That was cute! And i loved the ending!

~Kurosaki~
robin X3 chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
3 3 strawberries 3 3
TheCatWithTheHat chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
Ichi's reaction lol

Love this pairing great work *3*
wt183 chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Nice! should have read the sequel last,, lol
Child of the Ashes chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
This was so cute! Love the whole idea and wouldn't mind seeing a second chapter... Hint, hint. :)
SilverFlameoftheWindScar chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
Oh my god, that freakin' DUNCE! LMAO! Maybe he'll be a little bit more attentive to her 'I wuvs you' looks now, ne? Lol.
soundedlove chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Ahh, so friggin cute! lol who knew ichigo actually figured something out? XD Great story!
rook chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
SUPERB STORY! THE BEST STORY I HAVE ACTUALLY READ! I FEEL LIKE READING AGAIN AND AGAIN!
IchihimeFan chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Smart! Can't wait for the next chapter! ;)
Angelina Cat chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Awww, this is soooo cute- Keep it up cuz you're doing a good job*-*

Angelina~
swanfrost chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
that's really cute! GO ICHIHIME!
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