Poor Malfoy.. I feel bad for him.. Is like Ron just take an advantage on him..

Nice story.

SEQUEL! please please please!

I loved it! The realistic Hogwarts style is my favorite. You should consider writing another chapter for all of your readers. I wanna see how much better the second time is. :)

Sequel, please! ;)

you should write more on this story***it was really good and very in character

I don't know what prompted me to look up this pairing, but after reading this, I don't really regrett it ;P

I enjoyed it, the idea of something sparking between these two during the tournament is sound. I wish it would have been longer so it could have really been flushed out, and I wish it had ended better for Draco.

cool story :) But poor Draco XD

wow - hot fic! loved the way they fought while having sex. draco should top next time, but ron won't give up control easily :) maybe a cock swordfight to determine who's on top? i feel more description would enhance your writing style. dig in their, and bring it to life with adjectives. how did it feel? smell? sound? taste :)? dont sum up a scene - "ron's strength finally won out" - show us how they struggle, and how ron overpowers draco. hope that helped. this was some really great work - super sexy!

Great story, shame it's only a one shot! Well done! Xxx

Great story! It had a couple of grammar mistakes, but overall it was a nice piece.

interesting story!

i really enjoyed it actually, and you still made the characters seem believable. I wouldn't mind if you made this a two-shot with some sort of followup, but i understand if you want to leave it as it is.

wonderful job!

too bad this is only a one-shot