I wish this was part of the books. It's so sad and beautiful!

This was great...:( I guess it in that certain bloodline that all the she-cats have tragi deaths...

I love this story!

That was beautiful. I just finished re-reading Crookedstar's Promise and reading this brought tears to my eyes. It's in-character and emotional, but not melodramatic; you kept everything very heartwarming and bittersweet. Excellent work!

This is sooo cute! Awesome job!

Poor Crookedstar. He didn't deserve that.

Beautiful story! You wrote it very well!

I'm crying now…

This is WONDERFUL. It gives a point of view I can easily see Crookedstar possessing, and it's beautiful. I love how you incorporate Featherkit's similarities, not just physcially, to Silverstream and Willowbreeze. I love this!

Very sweet and sad. I can just imagine Featherkit/paw/tail saying that. And Crookedstar... He must've felt like Fate was mocking him, sending him a mate, a daughter, and a granddaughter who all looked the same, and would all meet the same fate. I love this, I'm going to favorite it. :)

Oh my gosh, this story is amazing! Great work! Your writing is very advanced and fabulous, an all-around great job!

Happy holidays,

Horse