Reviews for Tired |
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![]() ![]() Sorry you had to spend Christmas alone, but you wrote an awesome one-shot. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad story. Bittersweet ending. Nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What did she do to amdre |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good Story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyable story, wee bit confusing at moments, like Jade's comment about Cat breaking her, that left me scratching my head, but still, very enjoyable read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh yeah is true you always have to kill someone! Hehe Hey girl Merry Christmas! :D Xoxoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tori has a big heart indeed, she may not have forgiven Jade but she still wants her in her life... that really must count for something as far as I'm concerned. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, very nice. I wasn't really expecting the Jori at the end, but I should have been able to guess considering this is an angst/Romance story. XD For such a short oneshot, this was very emotional, and the pacing and dialogue felt very natural. I also liked how you never out-and-out said something like, "I hate myself for killing Andre in that car crash." You writing has a nice subtlety to it that I don't see very much in fanfiction. Great job! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome, really liked it |