Reviews for Forbidden fruit
Orions Belte chapter 20 . 4/7
Thank you for writing this! Was a wonderful story, you do a great job here and and I had a great time reading, thank you.
Srabanti Karmakar chapter 20 . 1/30
Nice story!
the age Gap is nothing between the celebraties now! Some relationships work some don't depends on the couple not their age!
Anje chapter 20 . 8/11/2019
I absolutely loved everything about this story - thank you for writing it so well.
Can't understand why some people didn't like it - very narrowminded of them.
Simone9 chapter 20 . 8/7/2019
Such an amazing story. I loved the age gap between them. The concept of an older Damon and younger Elena sexy and it always appeals to me. Loved how Damon finally realised his mistake and fought for their relationship. Elena hallucinating Damon with her mind being stuck on the day her father found out was absolutely heart wrenching to read. She was never willing to give up on her love for Damon and she just had to forcibly move on because Damon gave up infear of her father.
Elena never stopped loving him and I am happy they found their way back to each other and got their happy ending.. All their sex scenes were so HOT. You did a great job describing their mutual attraction and the love they felt for each other..
It's sad that it took almost losing Elena, for her father to realise how he ruined his own daughters happiness and finally rectify his wrong doings.
The epilogue was so beautiful. The love and passion between Damon and Elena was as strong and powerful and these two really proved that age doesn't matter at all. When two people share a love and connection that deep and understand each other, are both so physically and emotionally compatible, no barrier can stop them from being together and spending their lives loving each other deeply.
You really portrayed this fact through this story in such a gorgeous way by showing such a deep rooted love bettween Damon and Elena. Elena becoming a successful writer and having a family with Damon made me emotional. Both of them got whatever they wanted. Their babies are so adorable..and Elena saying that she wants as many babies as possible with Damon. Lol. It was so cute. She really loves Damon so much.
There are couples of the same age who's love doesn't last and there are couples with age gaps who stay together and in love even after many years.
So there are no guarantees in life when it comes to what works between two people. Age doesn't matter at all. Just two people who are adults feeling an insane amount of deep and passionate love for each other.

I love love love this story. It's one of my absolute fav. Thankyou so much for writing this story and giving us this stunning and realistic version of Damon and Elena.
StarlightSo chapter 20 . 2/10/2018
Nice story you have here. Liked the idea of Damon being Elena's father's friend. Still developing feelings for her. Them trying to fight the attraction was just cute, it was inevitable. Liked the epilogue aswell. Thank you for your hard work.
Jacob Lee chapter 20 . 11/24/2017
awww.. this whole story was great. it was sad, real, and just.. great.
Anje chapter 20 . 9/1/2017
I loved this story & loved the really good ending.
It was well written & had really good build up in tension & appropriate climax.
jenny walker chapter 2 . 7/20/2017
ho I thought this was great chapter to read of the vampire was very detailed
Salvatoreboys4ever chapter 20 . 7/17/2017
Loved it to pieces! Their children are so cute and I lived the ending . So happy everything turned out so perfectly!
Salvatoreboys4ever chapter 19 . 7/17/2017
So happy for them! This has been an amazing story. Loved every minute of it!
Salvatoreboys4ever chapter 18 . 7/17/2017
Oh wow I'm in tears. Damon comforting her calling her baby and sweetie and Graysons admission and their hug. Just so powerful . Sob
Salvatoreboys4ever chapter 17 . 7/17/2017
You are right so much angst . Can't wait for things to be all better . There is still so much between them.
Salvatoreboys4ever chapter 16 . 7/17/2017
Oh the angst. Damon standing up to Grayson was great he is so miserable you can feel it. I melted when he said I need you. So much pain.
Salvatoreboys4ever chapter 15 . 7/17/2017
Yikes such a long time apart and they can still feel the intense sparks between them. Dying for them to get back together
Salvatoreboys4ever chapter 14 . 7/17/2017
So so sad. They are aching so much not to be apart . It's tearing them up inside. Blackmail to keep them away from each other. Grr. So unfair Can't wait to see where you go from here .
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