A perfect ending to a great story! I'm relieved to know that Mary Jane survived the ordeal. IT would've been very sad if she didn't make it. Thank goodness she's alright. I'm glad the story ended the way it did, and I hope you'll keep writing! Wishing you only the best with any future stories you write! :)

Great chapter! Can't wait to see how this ends!

This was an intense chapter. Hopefully everything will be okay in the end.

It was Harry! I should've known.

I hope you were able to overcome that without any effort. Sometimes in life we all go through hard times. It's just about what we do to handle them and eventually get out of them.

Great chapter by the way!

Glad to see that MJ is alright. She really gave us a big time scare there.

Great job keeping everyone in character! Love the scenes with Mary Jane and Peter!

I'm glad to know that you wouldn't truly kill of Mary Jane. She's too much of a match for Peter Parker to be killed off. I hope they get together in the end.

That cliffhanger was heartbreaking. I hope MJ doesn't die. It would be sad if she did. :(

This was a fun chapter to read! Keep it up!

This story isn't boring one bit. It's fun to read!

Nice one! I hope the date is with MJ. I'll be shocked if it's with someone else.

Nice chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Great first chapter! I like how Spider-Man offered to get her back to her acting class to ensure she is on time! :)

I'm sorry, but the grammar in this chapter was really, really bad. I couldn't understand half of what was going on : I hope this is the only chapter that's like this..