I hate birds and bees! This is exactly why I hate rule 34 and romance! Why can't there be any fanfics that are rated e for everyone (even children)?

This was really cute! Great work.

So. Freakin. Adorable.

Also, glad to see you back and writing. _

I'm not terribly familiar with MLP anymore, as I haven't seen any since the show was originally on air (back in the 80's?). But this seems to have the same tone that I remember from the series, in not probably subject matter that they would have addressed. I'm always amazed at your grasp of the different characters' voices and making each one sound like an individual person.

This was cute. I thought the "talk' actually did sound like something that would be explained in the show - not that it would, of course! Great job!

Lololololol funny.