I personally love this story. I think that its got great potential. If you add some more USUK and definitely add in Spamano, it'll be a work of art

Y-you spelled my name wrong... But I don't suppose you notice much? '-

Ha, I love the story so far! You're a great writer and I can't wait for more awesomeness !

So Arthur is very smart. Wait to see they fall in love with each other. So update soon, please :) -USUK-

I can't wait for the next part!

Dude continue dis story! It's epic - update soon pweasee :3

:DD you have to update soon!

:DD you have to update soon!

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Ahhh I think your story was really cute and funny! You did a good job on it! ouo

"Keekoo" I laughed at that! I love how Alfred can't spell worth a shit! :p

Only 5? How sad! Aww well, can't win 'em all I suppose.

Though, Alfred, the greedy food whore! He only gave Artie one slice! He's not that little! LOL. Poor guy's gonna starve. ;)

AMAZING! I LAUGHED ALOT~ it so cutee! and you totally got every one down XD. I am proud of the Little Grass Hopper.

only 5 chapters? awww make it 5 long chapters! i really like it and cant wait for more