ugh.

Its Hermione not Hermionie.

You should google what each common room looks like. Slytherin is actually pretty. Its in the HP books but im too lazy to describe them all myself.

And not every common room has a portrait. just gryffindor. what the Hufflepuff entrance is isnt mentioned in the books tho.

And wizards dont have electronics so the password couldnt be dance dance revolution. No offence but this is probably your worst story. Its okay because its obvious you didnt read the books.

Also she wouldnt have been able to get to Hogwarts in the first place because if she had no magic, the barrier at the train station that leads to platform 9 3/4 wouldnt have let her in. but oh well.

Pretty good.

Woot Woot! I got my Slytherin PRIDE!