Reviews for Emrys
Guest chapter 8 . 6/30/2019
Hello, wonderful work. I rather like the idea of Arthur finding out about Merlin by looking into Emrys.
I would like to suggest rearranging the chapters so this one (8. Chapter 7) is right after (6. Chapter 5). This way it tells the same event with different perspectives, one right after each other. And (7. Chapter 6) works while the reader knows all of what Arthur knows.
Irina Hunter chapter 11 . 11/8/2018
Forbearnan creates a fireball. The spell to push someone back is astrice (SP?).
xq1971 chapter 17 . 8/21/2018
this was a phenomenal take on a magic reveal!
tremaCEE chapter 16 . 6/10/2018
This is sooooo good. *sobs* So glad to read a story that shows Merlin's true potential. Seeing Albion born and Merlin being really Emrys with the Once and Future King, feels nice. Interesting plot. And congrats to Gwen & Arthur. I always wondered why Gwen wasn't pregnant on the show. Arthur deserved to have an heir.
Clariqueen chapter 11 . 9/18/2017
Oooh! I'm fangirling to the point of giggling... That's a compliment for sure.
Crystalzap chapter 17 . 8/23/2017
cool :)
Crystalzap chapter 16 . 8/23/2017
this was GREAT! I am Glad to see them working together, and bring about Albion
Tonsoffandoms chapter 16 . 5/24/2017
I love reading stories like this where magic is actually brought back and Albion is within their grasp. I also loved how badass Merlin was! He finally got the recognition he deserves. Also, I love the twins idea! Gwen and Arthur would be such good parents!
madnessdownunder2 chapter 10 . 4/28/2017
I thought Aithusa was a she? Very nice!
addyeb0123 chapter 16 . 4/1/2017
Ok, I don't care how long it's been since you finished this story. You should right a sequel. It was just too good! I loved it!
Claude Amelia Song chapter 17 . 12/2/2016
Wow! I have read many reveals fics, but yours has something about it. I really enjoyed. I loved it.
I always look after good reveal fics and yours is one of the best. And if you want to know what I exactly liked from your story, go over reread all of it and you will have your answer. Everything.
Now I will go to your profile and read more.:-)
Guest chapter 16 . 11/20/2016
Wonderful! Is there a sequel where Uncle Merlin becomes the focus of the twins' pranks?
Guest chapter 15 . 11/20/2016
Great chapter.
Guest chapter 14 . 11/20/2016
Brilliant. Though somehow I don't think Mordred is dead. The lightning didn't actually hit him before he fell off the cliff.
Guest chapter 13 . 11/20/2016
Holy awesome!
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