Reviews for Breathless
Iawen Londea chapter 5 . 3/24
To my shame I realized I never reviewed chapter four or five. I'm so sorry! It's been a few years since I've watched Blue Bloods but this fic stands as one of my favorite fics ever, of any fandom. This whole fic was so well written. Your voices for each character were perfect. I'm really glad you didn't cut out Erin and Henry, they get ignored a lot in this fandom in favor of the relationships between Frank, Danny and Jamie. Anyway I just re-read this whole story and loved it all over again. Not sure if you're still around but if you are, I hope you're still writing because you are extremely talented.
DalamarF16 chapter 5 . 2/22
This was deeply painful...and ye5 amaZing!
I love how you painted Frank’s and Danny’s reactions, and Renzoulli guilt toward Jaime. Everything was just so perfect and so damn well written! Thank you for this!
only-some-loser chapter 5 . 3/20/2019
I know it’s been years since you uploaded this, but I just got into Blue Bloods and this is soooooooo gooooooood! Since it’s been so long, I have no idea if you’ll even see this, but if you do, could you recommend your favorite Jamie whump fics? There’s not enough of it on the show lol
aqaws321 chapter 5 . 12/5/2017
i love this so much and it’s a great thing to read after a crappy day so thank you
conservativegirl chapter 5 . 11/16/2017
Just found this story and it's incredible! I love the drama and family love :)
Gsmnp chapter 3 . 7/24/2016
still one of my favorite stories, I reread it often
This Fangirling Muggle chapter 5 . 4/29/2016
AWESOME last line - and I just got the title, I like that too. Good story.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/28/2016
THIS FIC IS SO GOOD IM LITERALLY IN TEARS. YOU ARE AN EXCELLENT WRITER AND YOU WRITE FRANK SO BEAUTIFULLY AND JUST THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOIR AMAZINGNESS
Guest chapter 5 . 1/8/2016
great job!
WaffleWorld chapter 5 . 11/27/2015
OH-
MY-
HOLY-
FRIGGIN-
NUGGET-
GOSH.
I have literally been combing the web for MONTHS, finding EVERY SINGLE JAMIE WHUMP STORY THAT THERE IS. I have read and re-read the good ones. I have read and re-read the bad ones. I am completely, unashamedly obsessed. So now the million dollar question is:
HOW DID I NOT FIND YOU BEFORE NOW?
You are my new best friend! Your fanfic totally fulfilled my fangirl desires. You're a great writer, you portray emotions really well, and you get really in depth with your characters, which maximizes the drama and Whump! level. I LOVE YOU! Can I marry your fan fiction?
MickyD777 chapter 5 . 10/27/2015
alright, i'm working my way through your stories, and i just had to tell you how much i love these. I MEAN. GOSH. your writing is incredible - fluid, descriptive, poetic, almost - and you have such a good grasp of these characters. i love Blue Bloods, and i've always lamented the fact that there weren't very many well written, in character fics out there... and then i found yours. i know you haven't posted anything in 2 years or so, but i hope you continue to write for this show. Jamie is such a sweetheart (he's definitely my favorite... although i do love Danny, it's obviously for different reasons. ;)) and i love love love all the family / brother feels in your stories. i hope to see more from you in the future. ;)

-Mklaihai
tinkrbell225 chapter 5 . 9/18/2015
i love this story
Hawaiichick chapter 5 . 9/17/2015
Wow, what an awesome story! There were some chapters in there where you had me at the edge of my seat. Loved all the emotions you managed to convey for all the characters. Thanks for the great read. :)
LEMarauder chapter 5 . 9/7/2015
Wow, brilliant job with this story! Very original plot idea and I just love your grasp on all the characters. This is one of my favorite show specifically because it focuses on the family dynamics (more so than just a case-of-the-week police procedural) and you have definitely captured that.
And of course I'm a total sucker for anything Jamie H/C so that was just icing on the cake. I'm looking forward to browsing more of your stories for some Jamie-centric goodness!

Cheers,
~LEMarauder
mcgeeksgirl chapter 5 . 7/13/2015
This story was fantastic! Loved how u wrote characters, so much emotion, family bonding, friendship! So many great moments, there are too many to list!
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