I like the idea, but *wow* is the writing bad. But, I've seen some of your newer stuff too and know you got better since writing this.

I hope you update and havent abandoned this story for starters. Also this story is a pretty cool take on peter and I would love to see some hurt/comfort stuff between laura and peter over their respective pasts. Anyway best of luck and keep on writing!

So you're suggesting Laura with a Batman origin story?

I think that your previous chapters were really good and I love how your writing made me laugh so many times. As a (not very good) writer myself, I know how hard it is to make a joke in the story that can make the reader laugh.

will Peter make a new advanced suit due to all the talk about how his suit is just a costume

I think it would be cool if created a new advanced costume
like how they did in the new spiderman game

Magnificent chapter can’t wait for more please update soon

Now here you have good grammar and writing! Touch up that first chapter and the reviews will start coming in even faster!

First chapters are where most impressions are made.

Hmmmmm…
A very good idea but what kills it is the writing. The bad grammar ruins the entire story. If it were fixed up then this would be an excellent fic.

Please update was such a good story sad to see it abandoned

Yes said does look weird thank you THANK YOU

HOW The hell is Peter parker 5'7? Ummmm in The official Marvel wikipedia, Peters height is listed as a 5'10 and 167 pounds, not 5'7 and 155 pounds, did you even research on spider-man stats, sorry i really get borthered when it comes to characters height and ibs, plz do some research next time, anyway great fanfiction.

Please nigga update!

Please i want more x23 and spiderman fanfiction

Come back n jump start thus story I love it. Wish he had some more relationship wise moments with the other girls too but its nice to see the bond between him n Laura... And to put in such a pivotal time ooo plz come back I need more