| Reviews for The Dressmaker's Bride |
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Guest chapter 3 . 7/22/2018 Thanks for the read. |
Taniya chapter 3 . 5/18/2016 Extremely well written, flawless and just downright awesome. |
Theunder017 chapter 3 . 10/26/2014 I have words. Alluring, vivid, elegant... I have thoughts, and i have so many paragraphs i would want to give you so you could explain how much i loved this story. But really, i couldn't exactly find the right combination of words. Thank you for this. It is unforgettable. |
Ludifer chapter 3 . 4/13/2014 OMG That was amazing! So poetic, so pretty, so beautiful! The vampire Tomoyo threw me at first but it was so well done! I applaud you! In case you can't tell... I loved it! XD Every word, so lovely. Great work! |
Major Mike Powell III chapter 3 . 11/14/2013 Well, well, soldier... This...was...wow. Just...wow! This story was absolutely amazing. The vivid, richly-detailed, captivating descriptions both of the scenery, character looks and emotions truly made this story come to life. This tale of love, suspense and vampires had me completely hooked from beginning to end, and yes, the plot twist of Tomoyo being a vampire completely caught me off. LOL But still, that only made me even more interested in how the story would play out. This was quite the fascinating take on the topic of vampires and their interactions with humans, and I think that Tomoyo makes for an awesome vampire, and Sakura makes a most compelling victim...or something more. I truly don't know for certain what their relationship became, and I can't really call this a happy ending, but damn! I don't regret readin' this one bit! X3 This is a truly amazing piece of work, my friend. Outstanding work! Semper-Fi! Carry on! |
Yuki chapter 3 . 4/9/2013 This was epic. I've been aching for a good Sakura/Tomoyo pairing, and this did the trick. For now, anyway. I may need another. ; |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2013 Your really good can you make another Sakura x tommoyo fan fic? |
CosmicDragon1971 chapter 3 . 1/27/2013 Okay. This is one of those stories where I'm split 50/50. On the one hand, this story is so rock solid and exceptionally good that I'm half expecting an anime movie version to come out. On the other hand, I'm like no way. Tomoyo would never ever, in an infinity amount of years, ever even think about forcing Sakura into doing anything. You did indeed specify 'Alternate Universe' but I believe 'Out Of Character' should have also been specified for Tomoyo. I did not like Tomoyo in this fashion. In carefully reading this wonderful story I have, unfortunately, concluded that Tomoyo is evil. A good natured Vampiress would not, in any way, force someone into their lifestyle. No matter how you look at it, Sakura was forced. Tomoyo was clearly thinking of only herself and pretty much made Sakura her slave. My rating for this story would be a 9 out of 10. My rating for what Tomoyo is would be a 0 out of infinity. |
LexaStarr chapter 3 . 11/15/2012 i'VE READ THIS BEFORE AND I still love this story even if i also love saku and syao! |
Pearl-Daidouji chapter 3 . 10/21/2012 I'll say it in one phrase: This is the best fic Tomoyo and Sakura fic in (and probably everywhere else) And like Tomoyo and Sakura fics are my favorite fics in the whole world, that makes this one my favorite fic ever. I have read it too many times and every time I think to myself, "Man, this is so good" Your vision about vampires, making Tomoyo kinda evil but also charming, everything she made to force Sakura into her slave, that was evil but Sakura was also longing for it to happen, every phrase Tomoyo said, every beautiful description you made. This is the perfect fic, well maybe I dint like that part at the end with those gazes between Tomoyo and Kurogane I've always consider Tomyo an entirely yuri character (but that's just my personal taste your fic still perfect). I could copy in this space every fragment of your fic that made me shiver, sigh, laugh, even cry with happiness, but i would probably end up rewriting everything. So I just will said that the ending is... is... It killed me, really, it's the best thing I've ever read. From the part that says "Belowstairs, the orchestra struck up a new number. Sakura straightened and surveyed herself in the mirror..." till the end it's just gold. I LOVE this fic so much. You are awesome, THANK YOU. |
Samuraixz chapter 3 . 8/19/2012 wow this was a very interesting story, thought what was going to happen was that Tomoyo was secretly going to more likely than not just do the same thing and make her like a slave or something but the entire thing of vampires surprised me entirely! only 2 things bugged me about this story, firstly it seems as though Sakura was able to actually fall in love with Tomoyo but at the end of the story it seems as though she still see's Tomoyo as yes rather her mistress' (even though that is still technically true) the way that Sakura responded to things was more of something like an obedient formal reply not more of a way that lovers/friends would reply to one another, to me it sounded more cold rather than heartfelt type of meaning second thing that bugged me about this story is that if Tomoyo was trying to in a word "seduce" Sakura I feel like she would have dropped more subtle hints/act more I don't know more romantic around her rather than make it so that she would just drop the ball and be like oh yea I want you to be mine for the rest of your life but other than that very good story it was a very interesting read and even though I really did not expect it the whole *bam now there are vampires really threw me for a loop but yes other than that very good story once again I feel like you could make a sequel based off this and go into more of the back story of Tomoyo and it would be very interesting to read |
tuxjim chapter 3 . 8/19/2012 Very interesting...A little like a cross-grained combination of "Dance in the Vampire Bund" with "Chibi Vampire" and a touch of a few other vampire-type tales and legends originating in Japan that I've read or heard about...with the added twist of the "Cardcaptor Sakura" thrown in for subtext. I'll look for more of your stories, then make up my mind as to whether or not to 'favorite' the story and 'follow' its author. As a plus, I'm interested in it, as opposed to "No, sorry, didn't like it". If I give a story an even break, I will come back to it in a while and THEN make up my mild about some of the 'doubts' that i might have about a couple of sections of the chapters. Ja ne! |
MysticalTears chapter 3 . 8/5/2012 Wow. Let me start with saying that I'm a person who can really be sucked into a story (if written well). The way you wrote this story, the flow of words... I can feel every tiny emotion in this story. That is amazing. Right now I have a sinking feeling in my heart and tears prickle behind my eyes. The hopelessness and fear Sakura felt, is overwhelming. I never expected Tomoyo would be a vampire for one second. Clues were there, the warning of Touya was easily brushed off by us as well. After all, Tomoyo was a little odd, but not dangerous at all. Or, at least, you really deceived us. I can't help but feel that Sakura unwillingly complied in the end. Touya's change almost made me burst into tears: if he was himself, he would have protected his sister. A small part of him, of course, wanted him to live his own life, but he would never be happy like this. Knowing his sister fell into a trap. At the end, Sakura didn't feel like Sakura anymore. It was as if the small part that liked Tomoyo, had been 'powered up', making her willing to comply with everything. This is not a happy ending and I don't think you intended it to be this way. Even if Sakura seems to comply with her new life, I'm sure it is the same with Touya. If she were in her full state of mind, if Touya was there to help her, she would escape from there. I like the mention of Fai and Kurogane in this, it was a surprising but nice touch. If I may suggest, I'd love to read a sequel of this. I have the feeling that there is someone out there who can open Sakura's eyes. I am of course talking about Syaoran. Because honestly, a 300 year old taking advantage of a 14 year old. She needs to be rescued! Thank you for writing such an amazing fanfiction. |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/5/2012 This fic needs more reviews! I love it! How about a sequel? ;D -Snowflake |
Spikesagitta chapter 3 . 5/16/2012 Wow! I didn't expect Tomoyo to be a vampire...of course there were all those hints in all the chapters. Still I enjoy it! |