Awwww, if only! Too cute of an ending. I loved it!

Hmm, I wonder how many brothers and sisters that kid has. I don't know how often Vulcans go into Pon Far.

Cosmyk

I've always thought that Christine Chapel would have been a great partner for Spock. She's so levelheaded and kind. It would have been interesting to have this story filled out a bit more with excerpts from their future life together.

Saavik? A lil early. However, great au story. I enjoyed it immensely.

Very nice, crisp and said so much with so little. Bravo!

Good story. Wish it had been longer.

This was quite cute! How about writing a story WHERE his parents meet and date?

Bina

WOW - interesting.

Pity it wasn't Uhura that took the soup to Spock, instead of Chapel. I never really liked Chapel's character.

To me she was just another "dumb blonde nurse..."