This is good! Naughty, just what we all like! Can't wait to read the rest!

OK I love it, I don't like Ocean Breeze being the bad pony here but it is still good. Though, you did say his instead of her in a sentence. One final thing, I forgot until just now, on one of your author comments you asked us to guess what Libby's special talent wound be and you gave us some clues, based on those clues, I would think that her special talent would be dancing/break dancing/preforming.

The kitchen was a mess, to put it lightly. The door of the fridge was partly open, and quite a few of the contents were spilling out. If anybody were walking underneath the cloud at this point, they were likely being hit by a rain of milk

You said body instead of pony :D

Last chapter when I read; Firestorm, also referred to as Storm, looked at Pinkie and smiled. However, his smile was not sincere; he seemed to silently ask, "You mad?"; I burst into laughter, I usually don't laugh very hard ( though I giggle when it is well placed though.) at those joke but, omfg that was too well placed, it was to good! I was half laughing-close-to-where-it would-be-loud-enough-to press-the-caps-lock-button-if-we-were-putting-it-into-writing and have coughing because I was eating a paper towel at that time because I am weird. XD. and when Pinkie said "Butterscotch…please stop defying the laws of physics." I was like, but you do that all the time. You always break the fourth wall Pinkie. XD

(Has not got done reading chapter yet...again.) Pinkie Pie, on the other hand, had been up and about since the day she'd awoken, which was two days after the foals had been born. At first Castaway and his assistants had tried to keep her in her room, if not in her bed, but she kept escaping by using methods that none of them could explain. XD XD XD XD XD XD That's Pinkie Pie alright! XD

ok I have not read it all, I have just got to the part where Luna's eyes were glowing and wind was blowing violently outside. It is taking all over my energy not to half-scream-half-laugh; SHE FUCKED UP! OCEAN BREEZE FUCKED UP! SHE FUCKED THE FUCK UP!

I really loved this story but you know what makes a story even better? More chapters! *squeals*

I LOVE this story! I am a Discord shipper...I like Discord x Anyone...Five stars!

oh what a delight full surprise i thought for sure this brilliant story was dead forever left unfinished im glad i was wrong for this story so far has had a great concept and an exceedingly brilliant execution keep up the good work and please try to update sooner this time Signed your reader Fluttershy4ever

Glad to see this updated, great job as always _

hey nice story so far.i cannot wait for the next 16 chapters

Omg you have to write more this is an amazing story and I cant wait to read more!

more u never update and i want more

Please update soon. This is the best

Tobuscus