Such a cute one shot :)

Cute!

Wonderful! I read it out of season (it August,for goodness sake) but It made me feel like it was that time of year all over again. For all I know you wrote another piece, but just in case you haven't, I hope you write more. I swear this story was a virtual slice of you favorite dessert! thanks for writing it!

cuuuuute!

I say that you...TOTALLY FREAKING CONTINUE!:D this is so cute! If you turn this into a story (which I REALLY SUPER hope you do haha) the next chapter should start off with her and him and his family! Like his dad greeting her and making fun of him like always haha cant to hear what you think!:D

Hi there, I had a few things I wanted to say :)

First: I really enjoyed This fic, and I was completely moved to tears!

Second: You are awesome!

Third: I would love for This to have a sequel, where their relationship develops, or an date at new years eve.

Fourth: If possible, could you please, please, please write a fic for Valentines day with these? Not for valentine, thoug that would be great, but the story taking place at Valentines?

Fifth: Keep up the good work! (w)/

how touching! keep up the good work.

Wow, this was such a great story. I love how realistic your writing is. You portrayed every character so well. It wasn't cheesy at all. Please write more if possible. All I can say is that it was beautiful, the writing and everything. It was such a great pleasure to read it. Love it! :)

You're writing was just so great in this! You really got their character's right too. It was short but well worth the read. Very cute, I loved the scenario. :)

that was too cute for words. ichigo sure is dense and innocent. i don't think i'll ever meet a guy who would do nothing if he slept on the same bed with someone as beautiful as hime. anyways, srsly, amazing 1shot. i had smiles on my face while reading. looking forward to your next fics!

Such a wonderful story! I absolutely loved it, and you have a great writing style as well that just made the story even better - you should write a sequel! That would be awesome to see if how and if they get together after this x) awesome story :D

that was the most beautiful story ever, thank you so much for writing it

I think this is undeniably, indisputably one, if not THE best Ichihime stories in existence. The only possible change you could make would be to make it into a multi-chapter story that never ends because it is THAT amazing!

i read ur story from start 2 finish. it REALLY is long. i loved it though pleeaassee make more. i just love ichihime stories!P

Awww, cute one- Your story really made me happy*-* Thanks

Angelina~