Hello, just wanted to say I'm totally here for your bad A sakura but you've made a few mistakes in your sentence structures. I'd say, since you already have a good story, that a beta reader or maybe just setting up your computer so it reads your story back to you. I catch a ton of errors like this. Please ignore me if this is unwanted, but either way please keep writing.

Hello Nekothelostbutterfly,

I am pretty sure I've read your story more than once. Don't get depressed, creative criticism is a good thing, and if they are being rude tell them to eat a d***! It's easy to complain but they can't create their own stories so don't let them get to you.

Yes , she should take off her mask

I'm sorry you made her Mary-sue and the story seems rushed. Also everyone talks the same. There is no personality in their speech. You're a good writer and can only get better so hopefully one day you do a revamp. Maybe write about how she got stronger instead of her automatically being op.
And I know the village is harsh but it's unrealistic that EVERYONE hates sakura. Especially as a prized medic and hokage apprentice. She is also strong so they would not ostracize her.
And is she really up and leaving? She has people she loves how could she selfishly leave?
And naruto and sauske have no punishment? Why did they leave anyway?
I love the premis, you are a good writer, and creative. I hope to see this story done in a way readers can follow. I would love to see character growth and see how she handles getting stronger.

So sauske didn't use his cheaty eyes and naruto didn't make a single clone? 0.0

Black eyes can glow?

Umm... wtf is going on?

I'm so intrigued

Hmm I really cant wait for you to update this story. It has a lot of potential and I like the twist of having a dark Sakura.
I haven't read the next chapters so these are just based on chapters 1 & 2.
The monolgues/dialogues need to flow better and feel more natural.
Probably adjust some facts and some things about the story to make better sense.
Probably explain Sakura's skill set more.
Some of the character personalities don't seem as natural (I understand that most of them will be OCC but still).
Well done.

Damn things are getting excited.

It's really good so far

In really liking the plot but seemed to drag on a bit through this story just to get the climax of plot.

Please make the sequel still waiting on it

Though I like your plot very much

You could ask someone to help you with punctuation