I really love this story please continue!

Nooooooooooooooooo, it's torturous! why did you stop it here?! Pls Update!

You should a updated this story was addicting so sad too see a good writer stop writing.I actually thought this was one of the best stories that have a good ending, but I'll never know since you stop updating,

Are u even gonne write this story anymore... I just saw last updated 2012... I'm sad...

I just finished chapter 16 and as i already said I'm solo addicted to your stories and I just wanted to know... When do you post normally? Like every 2 weeks or every week or like... Yeah. And if you wander why I said I already said at the beginning I wrote a review later the day sating i was addicted to your story and that it was the best story I read so far and that i read alot fanfiction. Yeah. So I really like your story and look forward to ur next update and yeah...

Wow geez you call yourself not good... Its like the best fanfiction I read and I have read many. Only today I read 3. but yeah coming to the point I really love youre storyyyyyyyy. I started reading this story this morning and in addicted to it. I evben read it in schoollessons under my desk, evil me, but yeah I really love your story!

Hey, so to Start off, amazing story and work. It is truly facinating how emotional and sad/happy you geht when reading your fanfic. Really please update, and dont think oft your fanfic as not good. I am literally really lose to crying and yea.. Pls do not give up On This story... You do not have to worry about your chapters being "Bad" in your eyes, they are great. Reading the story makes a really big difference, its insiring and you should be rewarded with immortality. Plesse i beg you, for the love of zeuses pink fluffy unicorn underpants, post another update. I wish you only the best of luck, and really, do not worry about your story. Pls do make the next chapter bout' artemis beging freed and so On. Farewell author, I hope you read This

~Pikzelss

God dammit I mean seriously there is so little communication that your making your own story crap. Like going the OOC route with Poseidon and making him an uncaring ass that went from loving Aphrodite to hating her randomly. Along with literally giving zero shits about his child which is stupid. What your doing with Percy is crap horribly thought out crap he hates his mother for no reason he’s been alive for roughly 3,000 years and has never grown the balls to confront his mom over his past which he has zero facts and is filled with assumptions. Says he love Artemis but then does something that proves he doesn’t.

Fuck you percy says he loves Artemis but then proves to us he doesn’t cause he’s to much of a butch to face his parents that miss him but won’t approach them cause reasons.

Oh my god this writing his pathetic, seriously He’s literally just a several thousand year old overgrown child, and how exactly does atlas sneak up on Artemis he isn’t a stealthy guy and she’s the hunter of hunters like seriously.

Bad writing bro, he’s already been caught by her like threw him under the bus it’s literally impossible for him to keep up the charade in front of her.

Wow the ever so popular whiny bitch syndrome

This is honestly complete garbage how have Artemis and Aphrodite gone so long not knowing that Percy was Perseus . And you skipped to where he was a demigod in camp halfblood, ir is so overrated and overused complete and totally trash stop writing

keep going please this is epic

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