I was happy to read a Ichigo in Mugestsu form but you suck at writting so it's a killjoy, Ichigo lost everything but he's not even angsty, the worst thing is the accumulated IQ of Ichigo and his 3 spirits don't even reach 2...
The idea is good even if not original but the execution is just awful, it's way below trash tier, you should stop writting and just reading, don't be in denial you'r untalented in writting and you seems to be quite dumb.

fuck the soul society

her adopted brother is a waste of spunk that creates life hes a cunt what brother would kill his own sister get real i would kill to protect my babby sister

I love it please continue

Ur tenza is very good. With him like this their team can be known as team of insanes

hey if you do not like there story then shut the fuck up and stop reading it because I WILL NOT STAND FOR ANY TYPE OF BULLYING SO GET OVER YOUR SELVES AND DON'T BE DICK SUCKERS

I'm so gld i skipped all this bs oc characters and dumbass story thank god you had that 1% working part if your brin to realize that your story is TRASH.

Reading this crack fic was so fuckign annoying thank god it is abondoned.

I can't believe how heartless ichigo is in this story. He just killed two of his friends whom he had sworn to protect and sees as not a big problem.

Wai

Yeah, you COULD say they're the royal guard, but that doesn't make any sense. But, I'll give you benefit of the doubt, considering when this was made.

It's very safe to say you lost the original direction of the story. This is also your own fault, considering you killed Aizen so damn quickly, and the arancar didn't even bother to do anything. And now, you make his Mugetsu form look like utter crap. What are the gods even doing in this story? What about the rest of the arancar army? What Happened!?

Tf is this shit

How about nelliel

Awhahahah~! Shes soo cute! Chouko is soooo cuteeee awwwaahhhhhh I love it~!