Anakins gonna be mad!

I loved it you should really write more like this

Very good story. Waxer and Hardcase survived, and Dogma kept a straight head. You. Rock. May the Force be with you.

Aaaand you saved Waxer. Faith in humanity restored...

You saved Hardcase! You rock!

So, um, your grammar, spelling and such need some work, but what really irks me is that your "" symbols seem to, ah...be broken? They're appearing at the bottom of words, not above them where they should be. Might want to fix that.

I like this story. I like Ahsoka being there to tell Krell off and call him out and prevent all those awful deaths of the clones. You're pretty good at keeping her in character.
You know what I don't like?
The writing.
Your grammar. Dear God, it burns. Is English not your first language? Because that explain a lot.
So many sentences are out of order. "Do not blame Rex, he did not have to do anything with it." Um, pardon me, but I believe you meant he did NOT have ANYTHING to DO WITH IT. Please, please proofread before publishing and CHECK YOUR GRAMMAR. This story is interesting, but I actually find it painful to read due to the many grammatical errors. Also, spell-check: you need it.
Another thing: you overly dramatize dialogue when there is no need to do so. You use the phrase "I yelled", "he yelled", so often it makes it seem like the characters are having a continuous shouting match. How about "I raised my voice in growing frustration"? Or using adjectives like "I said angrily", or "he barked in a harsh tone"? Adjectives are very useful. I suggest using an online thesaurus while writing, they're quite helpful.
Oh, and you don't have to capitalize all dramatic or emphasized lines, that's what we have italics and bold for.
This is an interesting, promising story. I like that Hardcase was saved by Ahsoka going on the mission. You're decently good at keeping the characters true to themselves. You just need a little proof reading and editing.
That's all. Tallyho!

What a wonderful story.

That two-faced son of a bantha! I knew there was something I didn't like about him.

Taking out the ship was successful, but things are looking grim for Fives, Jesse, and Hardcase. I can't believe Krell actually punched Ahsoka. This has gone too far.

It appears Ahsoka and some clones have a plan of their own.

The clones may have succeeded in taking the base, but it's not over yet.

Krell is just too stubborn to listen to reason.

Krell is really starting to rub me the wrong way.

Pong Krell may be very demanding, but there's something very fishy about him.