*sigh*. I just loved this. Your writing was exquisite with details and dialogue. It all felt so real and deliciously 60s. Fantastic job! I shall now check out some of your other stories. :)

Okay, honestly, you're so talented, and I'm so jealous, and also kinda annoyed because now I'm gonna have to sPend te next week reading your stories. Also; my name is Carlotta. So that was exciting. Lol

Love reading this!

Your writing really does have the quality of the old yellow spine books, actually better. There's more depth of feeling and motivation to the characters. I always feel like I've slipped into the past when I read a chapter of your story.

It's a very nice feeling.

i really liked this story, i have never been a ned fan i always liked frank, but i still liked it. the period writting was very well done. when i was a senior in high school for my pshchology final i took a ND book written in 1932 and then read the same story updated in 1982 (i graduated in '84) and did a comparison between the two hitting on sicial norms , the way women where precieved in sociaty and the technology. your writting riminded me of that exsperiance. great story. thanks.

"Thank God," indeed. A lovely chapter with well written characters. I really feel for Nancy and Ned and I'm happy to see them back together. Good work!

This is really beautiful...it makes me nostalgic for an era I wish I could have experienced. As always, your characterizations are spot on. Very nice!

I was never much of a Ned lover, and then when the Frank flirtation was introduced with the Super Mysteries I was all over that.

This story has me routing for Ned and Nancy to work it out some how. Great job!

I can't wait to see what happens next.

Well, Ned certainly got a chance to flex his muscles in this chapter. So rare to see that, but nice.

I'm still curious as to what Nancy, Bess, & George have gotten themselves into.

And that last line is gold. At least Ned knows his feelings, how about Nancy?

Aww...Love it!

Wow! Great story. You don't see many Nancy/Ned stories here and this one is truly a delight to read and so very well written.

You've developed the characters beautifully - I can really feel their emotions.

You've got a nice little mystery going on, too. I'm totally invested in this story and anxious to see where you take it.

Normally, I read Hardy Boys fiction instead of Nancy Drew, but I really like this story! You write the thoughts of Nancy and Ned beautifully. They are complicated in their emotions; anger, retreat, longing, confusion- it's really terrific! I look forward to seeing where the story goes!