Reviews for An Ordinary Day Pegasus Style
Space1Traveler chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Great job!
Begoogled chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Another interesting and dramatic episode, with a concept that I can't remember seeing in SGA before, and that I find very plausible. Nice reference to the tribbles. And loved McKay, he's so snarky. Very in-character :) And I'm always in for stories featuring both Sheppard and Weir.
PBIceCream chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
Absolutely fantastic, thank you!
Gracie Holmes chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Loved it! I really like the aspect of seeing a 'normal day' :)
sheppardlover928 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Great story! Shep whump and comfort-yeah! Always wondered if those jumpers had restrooms? Remember when John was stuck with Rodney and the scientist for quite awhile and John locked himself away in the forward section to preserve his sanity?-I know, I know-a stickler for detail! LOL! Guess we dont erally need to go there, now do we? Lol!
Jedi40 chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
Another great Sheppard (and others) whump fic.

Nice to have Phil back again.

Nice touch that not only does John have a connection to the Jumper and the city, but the jumper has a connection to the city as well as to alert it if someone on board is ill and could risk the people in Atlantis.

Poor John really got stuck at the wrong place at the wrong time for his illness to hit him.

Nice ending :-)
Obsessed Pam chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
It's been a long time since we had an SGA story, but this one was well worth the wait!
robvb2000 chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
Great Story. Of course Sheppard would get caught in the worst possible situation when he got sick.
jasminesmommy chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
humm guess i should have known that something so friendly would have a great defence :)
BMick chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
Oh, I do hate having the flu! Easily treated, but so miserable even with proper care.

There have to be people like Phil in Atlantis, taking care of daily life's concerns. To see the city from their perspective would be fascinating.
TheNaggingCube chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
An anything but ordinary story. Nicely done on all fronts, a thoroughly enjoyable read. I very very much like the tech twist with the get logs and codes and such. Very cool and reasonable to believe.

Very good touch with Rodney's 'emotionless' response that John was being dramatic. Fitting for Rodney.
wisconsinrocks chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
This was a nice slice of life from the early days in Atlantis. You did a nice job. I really enjoyed it. The communication piece between the jumpers and Atlantis was a nice touch.
hotshow chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
I thought this story was very good. When I was reading it, I couldn't help but think, wouldn't it be great if one of our illness (maybe one that is no longer around, or what we would consider a common illness) would make the wraith get sick and die.

Looking forward to reading your next story.

Thank you.
JoaniexJony chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
Nice!

I love stories with sick John, and this was a good one.

Thanks for sharing.

Joanie.
SyfyFan chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
Great story. With the right amt of suspense and whump.