Reviews for Five Hours in Ye Old London
tammy henson chapter 24 . 8/19/2015
please pleaase update soon
RowenaIsKween chapter 24 . 5/23/2015
Update!
RowenaIsKween chapter 8 . 5/23/2015
I died!
STforRK chapter 24 . 7/15/2014
I really enjoyed this story, at times I had to catch myself from laughing out loud at work. I know some of my coworkers thought I must have gone a little crazy, giggling and laughing to myself while reading.
Elaine27 chapter 23 . 4/7/2013
John can be quite possessive, can't he? But I decided to like how you describe him ;) Even though I certainly don't want to be in Helen's place when he's once again overreacting...
Don't worry, I'm still following you! I hope you don't mind if I haven't got the time to review every chapter. Can't wait for the next upload :D
Guest chapter 19 . 1/27/2013
Well. Ashley certainly is an evil little one, isn't she? Only thing I could suggest to make this better would be putting the memory in italics to seperate it from the rest.
Elaine27 chapter 18 . 11/27/2012
I read chapter 17 and 18 in school between the different classes. I would read a small part in every break I had and start the next lesson smiling like an idiot. Therefore you cheered me up for two days (one chapter each day) and made school much more enjoyable. Thanks for that :D
You updating so fast also prompted me to continue writing on my own fanfics. Although they can't keep up with yours.
Can't wait to read another chapter!
Elaine27 chapter 16 . 11/11/2012
Wonderful new chapter, beautifully done. I'd so love to have little Ashley as my sister, she's adorable...Thanks so much for updating!
Guest chapter 15 . 10/25/2012
Wow! I can't wait to read some more of this. :) This is a great, adorable little story.
GrandEmpress13 chapter 15 . 7/29/2012
PLEASE! Please tell me this is not the end! This is one of very few Helen/John stories I enjoy, being the Teslen that I am! But I do love your story and really, really, REALLY would like it to continue!
Huggles,
Riley
Elaine27 chapter 15 . 7/15/2012
Awesome chapter! Ashley is a cheeky little girl and has a temper just like her mother. I'm still waiting for Helen spilling the news though ;)
Guest chapter 14 . 7/9/2012
Great Chapter! I'm kinda jealous now, 'cause I want that zoo visit, too. Sounds like a lot of fun ;) Looking forward to part two!
Tashah2109 chapter 14 . 7/9/2012
Love this. Super super happy you wrote more. I am ridiculously excited about seeing Ashleys reaction when she finds out about baby no. 2.

Thank you lovely. xx
Misery Loves Sarah chapter 14 . 7/8/2012
HAHA...love it. Ashley is adorable!
Elaine27 chapter 13 . 7/1/2012
Yeah, you're really good in writing Ashley as a child. But I'm still waiting for Helen to tell John of her pregnancy! Can't wait :D
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