now i wanna know what kanda is thinking through all of this...need another sequal

(cries like a baby.) Kanda... Allen..Listening to Never had a dream... It goes so well with this story... I'm actually crying... I get emotional when I read stuff like this... (sobs.) Mana, let Allen be with Kanda for a short period of time...At least until he has to let go...

That was...and then...Wow. That was incredibly hot and heartwrenching as well as just plain awesome like so much of your other works I enjoy so much. :) I loved it!

oh sweet jesus, I'm already a fan of your stories risky business and promises, but I never thought to see what other stories you had
this was just
perfect

Don't think it's mushy at all. I like the way you wrote Allen. This has a quietness to it as he's thinking about his feelings.

wow! i just ove in denial ALlen is. And it just hurts me to see that Allen knows Kanda is not in love with him but her.

*cries herself to sleep for a week*

These two make my heart flutter the way you describe their love for one another, but Kanda won't admit to it! Wonderful written, engaging, heart felt. Wordie is fine! :)

ARGH srsly teh love. Ever have so much to say about something that you can't even say it? That's me, right now. I have way too fucking much to say about this and nothing will come out other than a generic "it was wonderful and I feel the need to indulge in some ocular gushing," but it was so much more than that. In a lot of ways, Allen's musings paralleled my own thoughts on things such as the merits and drawbacks of casual intimacy, and how oddly satisfying yet unfulfilling it can be. And I would definitely throw my two cents behind Allen's first crush being the same person as his first friend in India, so I'm glad to see that included. What can I say? I LOVED IT, dammit. Breathtaking pacing.

I would like this too. It is a very good read. I would have liked it to go on a bit though. Find out Kanda's side of the relationship. Maybe one day though.

yes very mushy :') but way too cute god i love yullen i loved your story and you can thank DewdropLotus since she was the reason i went and found this story :P she was all like read this its a great story now ima try and check out your stories yup

GAH, I'VE BEEN TRICKED! I THOUGHT THIS WAS YULLEN BUT IT WAS AREKAN D8 *flees*

Aw, I love mushy. And I love reading them getting past the "it's just physical" stage with which my own headcanon also says they'd begin. I'll have to seek out your story "Touch" now, too. _

Good! I like this kind of Allen too. Yullen forever

This is brilliant. The sex was so tastefully done and Allen's feelings are conveyed so beautifully, without ever seeming melodramatic or exaggerated. I love seeing Kanda through your Allen's eyes - his perspective is insightful, pleasing and painfully emotional, and after all that build up of doubt (and Allen putting off confronting it for so long), the ending is perfect. What makes it even better is that *Kanda* is the one who does what Allen's wanted to do all along (i.e., kissing, meaningfully, just for the sake of it) and it all manages to come off oh-so-natural and inevitable. What make it even more perfect is that I don't think Kanda was nearly as conflicted about this as Allen - he has such a simple, straightforward outlook on life. If he wants to do something, he'll do it; it's sort of amazing.

Again, this was brilliant I hope you'll keep writing more Yullen?