This is absolutely amazing! I am a bit sad that it is just a one-shot, but it really is fantastic as a standalone. It is extremely fascinating, and I simply adore how you have written these characters. You are a fantastic writer and quite possibly my favorite author on this site (your story ,'They All Fall Down', was the first fanfiction I ever read, and it is still my favorite). Thank you for sharing your work on this site. You are amazing~

That... was beautiful.

I was not expecting to love this as much as I did. I love how you incorporated Lavi’s writings throughout this one shot so much. Of course I would love to see more but since it’s been years since you posted it, I doubt it’ll go anywhere but it’s a wonderful story and you could take it further if you really wanted to.

WHAT! great i likeeeee

YES. OH MY GOSH. AAAHAHAHAHHAHA THIS IS AMAZING I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! Keep up the amazing work!

Okay I really, really love this. Do you know if anyone ever took you up on your offer to continue it? If so, I would absolutely love to read it. Please let me know!

Wow! This was amazing! And I can totally see it becoming a full-length story because that ending was just awesome! Very good job.

So good... I tend to avoid one shots but I really enjoyed this. I just felt so emotional when I read this, I love your writing style, I'll defiantly check out your other work.
Etch xxx

Thanks for the amazing story! I love reading your works about the exorcists! Uts not just xour great style of writting, im also glad that you include no pairings in your stories, which is even better! Thank you so much for writting all these enchanting stories, i hope you will writr some more! :)

Wow, that was- well it pulled me in. Wonderful one-shot. Thank you for sharing this.

Oh man your stories are really good! Please continue making more.

More more! I know this hasn't been updated in a while but please!?

Wow. I can only say ... wow. I read this listening to Thomas bergersen. It. Was. Epic. TOTTALY faving this!

Lovely story. Really touching.

Holy shit. This was absolutely amazing. I never imagined such a short crossover could feel so... Huge. I really cant describe it accurately, but it feels as though this story has no beginning and no true ending. I love the style you've written this in, what you've included from Lavi's writings and how it is part of Harry's job that introduced him to the exorcists legacy. I feel kinda left at the revelation of Allen's still-alive form encased in crystal though. Will Harry free him form the stone? Is Allen even still alive? Will Allen always be destined to fight his brothers and sisters (the other noah)? Allen;s reflection really revealed the nature of the exorcist's battle in this context, and I would love to read what an exorcist himself has to say... But that being said, I really cant ask you to continue this. It really lets my imagination free, and I love you for that. Thank you so much for writing this epic story, I really appreciate it.