I like this idea! I almost think Rick should have done this; the reunion when the ship landed was so expected.

This... this is not okay.

Nice! Amazingly written. (As always.) :)

I thought it was Wisdom's daughter, not daughter of wisdom... Correct me if I'm wrong, 'cos I haven't read the books in a loooong time.

I totally agree, RR is a complete troll. I might have burned the book if this was what we got in the beginning. And if I was reading this in homeroom and then my teacher was like "You gotta go to your classes now" I would've started swearing, which isn't like me. You're a good writer, even though i don't like the scenario.

I swear. U r like related to Rick rordian. Curse u cliff hanger!

But I still love u

Why is it so sad Dx

aww... sweet, hopeful. nice pre MoA :)

Awwww, this is so cute! You're writing is so... Heart-breakingly good!

And here I was thinking I'd read all the good fics in the PJO fandom. This was brilliant! I can tell you, it has been a long time since I've read in this fandom and your fic reminded me why I loved it so much. It was perfectly written, with excellent spelling and grammar and syntax. Thank you for reconnecting me with Percy and Annabeth.

OMG! This was up on my birthday! Haha lol...it was a sad fic but totally awesome! I love your writing style, it's really good! Xoxo...:)

So confusing yet SSSOOO GOOOODDDD

really lovely 3

Heartbreaking but I like it :)

Not that it's bad, it's actually pretty awesome, but if it did I'd either cry or yell with foot-stomping tantrum. :/ Not cool. hahaha. But good job.

- Stand, Bow, Bye!