Reviews for csj the extended version
Darkcrest27 chapter 13 . 1/25/2019
WTH many Jedi are able to see possible futures having a jedi discount one of her own abilities seems VERY stupid. Especially as a massive part of lightsaber combat is based on precognition
Super Vegito 2 chapter 5 . 6/5/2015
Indeed, in no way is Stargate's technology more advanced than Star Wars, considering the level of technology the Rakatan's and the Celestials had.
The Rakatan's had four war space stations. One is a Terraforming Station, and the other could xenoform entire planets. Rakatan's could even create new species. The Rakatan's had technology that could destroy planets, and they inherited that from the Celestials. They were the ones that imprisoned the World Razar.
Their Skipships had disruptor fields that could devastate planets (like what happened to Tatooine).
There's actually a fifth station that is called the Mother that can create entire species, however it does not count as one of the four war stations.
The Celestial's have the technology to construct and realign Solar Systems, mere leftover machinery of the Celestials, such as Centerpoint Station and the Cosmic Turbine, had the ability to manipulate gravity on a interplanetary scale. This was done through the use of tractor beams, repulsor pulses and hyperspace wormholes. The gravitic tractor seen on Centerpoint was able to move planets or suns and capable of both collapsing or destroying entire solar systems. The hyperspatial anomaly that bisected the galaxy was considered easily within the capabilities of the Celestials. The destructive energy of an Infinity Wave was based on Celestial principles, nuff said on them.

Not a bad story. :)
LoneWolf1968 chapter 17 . 6/18/2014
Nice I really like the concept but you really need to get a beta, no offense...
LoneWolf1968 chapter 13 . 6/18/2014
Do you use a beta for your stories? Not criticizing, I just noticed a lot of misspellings and small mistakes that a beta should catch and correct for you.
LoneWolf1968 chapter 5 . 6/18/2014
Ok, why the sudden switch in the 1st part of this chapter from Sam to Elizabeth?
Arekanderu chapter 15 . 6/3/2013
Please please for the love of god use capital letters. It's a good story but it's so annoying to see the lack of capital letters
Andriabow chapter 17 . 3/19/2013
Superb story so far. I like Asura and even Jakel. I hated that Micael got his hands on him. I'd like more of Jakel. Please update sometime soon. Thanks
Regin chapter 17 . 2/8/2013
I Love, I Like, I Lust!Please Update Soon!
nased0 chapter 15 . 10/10/2012
That's a very interesting crossover.
Asura is an awesome Jedi character!
But you as a writer could be more careful about the spelling.
Major Simi chapter 17 . 7/10/2012
well looks like the Ancients too had Jedis, while artificial at first and now they know how to make Jedis out of normal people whitout the danger of going to the dark side, great chapter, well done keep going
FORD B chapter 17 . 5/23/2012
Awesome chapters!
Chewbrok chapter 17 . 4/30/2012
Good chapter, love the similarities between Sith and the Ori. Small edit tip: don't start sentences with "and", try replacing the period before it with a comma or semi-colon.

Update soon.

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Chewbrok
Major Simi chapter 16 . 3/27/2012
well looks like woolsey is finished and now something new came up,well good chapter
Chewbrok chapter 16 . 3/25/2012
Good chapter, I like the way Asura handled the interview. Please update soon.

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Chewbrok
Major Simi chapter 15 . 3/15/2012
well looks like they went throu anoter crisis. good chapter i liked it that they could save davos or at least prolonge his live. well done
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