I literally drooled while reading this lmao

This was amazing! Very hot! You are a great writer. Loved the part at the end when Albus said, "Don't take this the wrong way, but I learned it from Jamie and Teddy." It was amazing how you described Albus' 'problems.' Just amazing!

OMFG THAT IS SO SO SO FUCKING HOT!

wow

This is amazing. I loved it. Adorably cute and sweet and yummy rawr-hot. :P :D

Ohhhh I just adored this! Amazing!

Sugary. Cute, hot. Thanks :)

Mmm... That was beautiful. I always appreciate it when graphic scenes are actually written in the proper manner. It is ever so distracting when one notices a misplaced comma, no apostrophe, and the like over and over. I commend you for a well-writen one-shot, and wish there was more. ;]

very cute. i like it a lot.

I really really love ths story. You cannot imagine how many times ive read it!its witty,sexy,cute..i wish it was longer

It's official, I died. You killed me.

Just, ohmigawd. I love Albus/scorpius, and I don't tihnk it's as popular as it should be...Though I love Drarry too which kinda makes my love for A/S a little creepy i think, lol.

Just, the innocence of it makes it so adorable and Albus' thoughts throughout made me wanna cry in fangirl lurve. Just, gah! Can I marry you?

That's the sweetest possible way for two 13 year olds to lose their virginity. :)

The guilt that Albus felt about his fantasies was described well, and I liked how you depicted Scorpius' character.

Is it wrong that I find this absolutely adorable? so cute! I love that Albus thinks of Scorpius as a snowflake when he seems so much more innocent

Loved this! I think you portrayed their age very well actually. Going to go read more of your stuff now! )